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Hypodermic Illusions

Pine needles fall on manicured lawns
  on quiet streets where elm trees grow
 But in their midst a demon yawns
 And screams through veins from which it flows

 Hypodermic illusions line the curb
 where cars are parlors for getting high
 Overdosing in the suburbs
 The inner city has no alibi

 A nightmare on elm street 
 and Freddy Kruger is nowhere in sight!
 But the boogeyman does not retreat....
 yet some will not awaken from the night!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Ashley Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 10:37 AM
Your poem with it's vivid imagery and intensity captures the horror of opioid abuse and it's consequences, Joseph. A heartbreaking write! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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May 18, 2022 at 5:57 PM
Thank you Susan
Lamoureux Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 5:21 PM
Wow! This is disturbing and captivating.
May Avatar
January 29, 2018 at 5:26 PM
Thank you Richard...
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 8:43 PM
WEll done, Joseph. You addressed something very troubling in our world with great effect using this rhymed form with imagery.
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January 28, 2018 at 10:09 PM
Thank you Andrea
One Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 2:28 PM
Damn! As Vijay said you depict this issue with vivid imagery...
May Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 10:09 PM
Thank you Silent One
Pandit Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 7:23 AM
You depict the horror imposing on our society with mighty words..I could see the faces ..helpless, but unknowing..an apt topic..well said, Joseph.
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January 28, 2018 at 7:50 AM
Thank you Vijay
Allison Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 3:49 AM
The image you paint with your words is so graphic as is the picture Joseph. The poor addicts pine for needles:-( addiction is such a tough cycle o break:-( hugs jan xx
May Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 5:30 AM
Thank you Jan...Yes a very tough cycle to break...hugs
Sands Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 7:15 PM
Very real and intense Joseph. Well written ! :)
May Avatar
January 27, 2018 at 7:33 PM
Thank you Heidi :)
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