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Pine needles fall on manicured lawns on quiet streets where elm trees grow But in their midst a demon yawns And screams through veins from which it flows Hypodermic illusions line the curb where cars are parlors for getting high Overdosing in the suburbs The inner city has no alibi A nightmare on elm street and Freddy Kruger is nowhere in sight! But the boogeyman does not retreat.... yet some will not awaken from the night!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 2/18/2018 10:37:00 AM
Your poem with it's vivid imagery and intensity captures the horror of opioid abuse and it's consequences, Joseph. A heartbreaking write! Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Joseph May
Date: 5/18/2022 5:57:00 PM
Thank you Susan
Date: 1/29/2018 5:21:00 PM
Wow! This is disturbing and captivating.
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Date: 1/29/2018 5:26:00 PM
Thank you Richard...
Date: 1/28/2018 8:43:00 PM
WEll done, Joseph. You addressed something very troubling in our world with great effect using this rhymed form with imagery.
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Date: 1/28/2018 10:09:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 1/28/2018 2:28:00 PM
Damn! As Vijay said you depict this issue with vivid imagery...
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Date: 1/28/2018 10:09:00 PM
Thank you Silent One
Date: 1/28/2018 7:23:00 AM
You depict the horror imposing on our society with mighty words..I could see the faces ..helpless, but unknowing..an apt topic..well said, Joseph.
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Date: 1/28/2018 7:50:00 AM
Thank you Vijay
Date: 1/28/2018 3:49:00 AM
The image you paint with your words is so graphic as is the picture Joseph. The poor addicts pine for needles:-( addiction is such a tough cycle o break:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 1/28/2018 5:30:00 AM
Thank you Jan...Yes a very tough cycle to break...hugs
Date: 1/27/2018 7:15:00 PM
Very real and intense Joseph. Well written ! :)
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Joseph May
Date: 1/27/2018 7:33:00 PM
Thank you Heidi :)

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