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In My Deepest Fantasies Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Anoucheka Gangabissoon. Date written: 01/12/2025

Good heavens, It's beyond my comprehension what you just did to me. It's a mystery hidden fathoms deep within your eyes; i n e x p l i c a b l e what came over me with just one nictitation. Could it be the bells hung on your eyelids? Intense curiosity precariously dangles at the tip of my tongue refusing to tumble out. I'm tangled cap-a-pie in your web of seduction. Could it simply be your powerful magnetism? I'm left hypnotized.

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Date: 1/18/2025 6:31:00 PM
Captivating, Edward. It pulls you deeper into it as you read it...excellent. I also enjoyed your last contest. Thanks for the placement.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/18/2025 6:39:00 PM
You're welcome, Mark:-) And thank you very much for the visit and comment. Feel free to join my new contest!
Date: 1/16/2025 10:39:00 PM
So beautiful how youv expressed her dear EI, your words also flow so seamlessly in such a beautiful and touching manner! I love so many phrases here especially " could it be the bells hung on your eyelids" " tip of my tongue-" the subtle use of alliterations there. "Web of sduction" love so much about this and the ending is brilliant and fitting for the poem! Pleasure reading this gem. Sending you light always
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/17/2025 5:12:00 AM
As always, thank you very much for the wonderful feedback, Inky. You make my day with each visit, my friend.
Date: 1/13/2025 5:51:00 PM
Nice expression of being under someone's spell, Edward. I had to look up cap-a-pie. I didn't know that expression.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 1/13/2025 8:09:00 PM
Thank you for the visit and comment, David:-)

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