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Hypnotist

I listened as you spoke Gums flapping in the breeze Words slipping off the tongue Expressed with so much ease Your verbal gymnastics Deserve a perfect ten I ask you one question You repeat it all again Your words enchant me I listen while you sell Some kind of hypnosis I respond to your spell I bow to your persuasion Your rythm my blues I want what you're selling This thing I won't use As I open my checkbook The spell starts to break My brain starts working When my hand starts to shake

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Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/3/2015 9:43:00 AM

So clever, love the rhyme and flow. I'm starting at the end and it may take weeks, but I want to read all of your rhyme ... CayCay

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/3/2015 9:48:00 AM

Thanks Cay Cay, I appreciate your interest.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/15/2015 9:33:00 AM

Thanks again Cynthia, I had forgotten about this one.

Cynthia Jones

Date: 1/15/2015 9:23:00 AM

Yeah. They think they've got us . . . but, we've fooled them. MUHAHAHAHA LOL Loved reading this Richard. *S* Cynthia

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/1/2014 11:46:00 AM

Close call! I really like this piece. Didn't expect the ending there. Another great one! Always, Laura

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 8/1/2014 1:52:00 PM

Thanks again Laura.

Casarah Nance

Date: 6/20/2014 7:22:00 PM

I hope you purchased the extended warranty too. ;)

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 6/20/2014 7:30:00 PM

Sure did!

Ivo Cos

Date: 5/14/2014 9:01:00 PM

Really enjoyed this, Richard!!!. So glad your first Poems are available here. I'm definitely coming back to read your old poems. Best wishes, -- ivo