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Hypnotic Seed

If I where but a flower I would completely overpower Passion exploding upon slow motion Burst forth gently, inducing satisfaction Numbing pain, exuding pleasure, irresistible Wafting flow, perfumed, appealing to desirability Inexorable heavenly, stimulating senses, comforting Hypnotic colours, psychedelic, evincing on persuasiveness Lose yourself in me, find servility, you so want to be mastered There is only one sweet moment, give in, indulge inequities Explore taboo feelings, ride the storm, I’ll set you free Allow my scent to saturate, permeate, predominate Don’t try understand, succumb, let it happen Relax unwind, in my redolent splendour It cannot be sinful, for nobody cares Nature does not judge, but gives Never forget my essence Have I not touched Sheer fantasy Pointedly If I Were A Flower Poetry Contest Sponsored by mystic Rose Rose 01/02/2021

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Date: 2/4/2021 1:40:00 PM
... Your name was first on my lips this morning, after reading your poem upon waking. A powerful demonstration of nature's captivating of us. Giving our thoughts up in exchange for feelings, the utmost sweetness gained. Your precious flower poem explains and promotes the essence enjoyment.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 1:51:00 PM
Thank you so much Sigrid, I had your poem absorbed in the back of my mind whilst writing this, and it was definitely the influence behind it, I think I was trying to hypnotize myself and anyone else trying to escape the grinding mundanity of life, cheers David
Date: 2/4/2021 1:03:00 PM
This was so aesthetically pleasing to the eye and bursting with beautiful word . Thank you for joining my contest, Congrats on your win.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/4/2021 1:26:00 PM
Thank you Rose Rose, was a great contest, I’m delighted to have made the cut, I so enjoyed writing this one, cheers David
Date: 2/2/2021 3:44:00 PM
Beautifully penned David. I was captivated by your effusive and emotive words. :) Linda
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David Kavanagh
Date: 2/2/2021 8:54:00 PM
Thank you so much Linda, I was trying to use the flower as an hypnotic influence, to assuage and comfort, all peoples negativity hang-ups and pent up feelings, cheers David

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