Hypnotic

She’s hip
Hypnotic
So fit
Exotic
I’m bit
By love
A cryptic
Kind of
Script
To wit
We think 
The world of
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
July 21, 2023 at 2:08 PM
David, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge H Words !
Allison Avatar
July 7, 2023 at 4:04 PM
ooh i wonder who she is david lol many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 6:15 AM
- Simple and straightforward - Congratulations on your win in the contest, David :) - hugs
Baker Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 5:01 PM
Nice rhythm to this one, David ... zips right along. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry, my friend. Have a great July! Bill
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