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Hypnotic

She’s hip Hypnotic So fit Exotic I’m bit By love A cryptic Kind of Script To wit We think The world of

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 7/21/2023 2:08:00 PM
David, wonderful and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge H Words !
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Date: 7/7/2023 4:04:00 PM
ooh i wonder who she is david lol many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/4/2023 6:15:00 AM
- Simple and straightforward - Congratulations on your win in the contest, David :) - hugs
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Date: 7/2/2023 5:01:00 PM
Nice rhythm to this one, David ... zips right along. Thanks for sharing your thoughts through your poetry, my friend. Have a great July! Bill
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