Notes About The Poem

Written 18th July, 2026 for submission to Hymn of the Heart Poetry Contest sponsored by Hiya Sharma 

 

“The heart sings loudest when it has been broken open.”

— (unknown / contemporary wisdom)

Hymn of the Heart

I part petals
like quiet psalms.
I hear these hibiscus hymns
pressed to the pulse of morning,
where colour hums
in crimson breath,
and the wind
remembers my name.
It comes unbidden.
The song my soul never seeks,
it finds me anyway,
threaded through my ribs.
A tremor beneath my thoughts,
an ache
I cannot unlearn.
I feel
a violin verse
between venom and Venus,
drawing its bow
through my silence.
Each note,
               a kiss.
Each chord,
               a wound.
I taste love
dripping with poison.
I feel beauty’s sting
                like truth.
And still
it rises in me.
The chorus a poet bleeds
        restless,
                unstillable,
moving in tides
of ink and ache.

A refrain
carved deep in my marrow,
learning the language
of my silence,
singing me open
again.
And again.

Until
I am lifted
beyond breath.

I kissed
an opera octave—
full-throated,
trembling,
infinite.

And in that surrender,
my heart,
no longer silent,
becomes
the hymn itself.
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Sharma  Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 5:56 AM
Dear Alison, this is such an evocative and delicate poem ~ tenderly laced with feelings that softly hum in the language that is understood only by the heart.. when even the silence of the soul becomes a song! Absolutely loved reading this one for the contest and appreciate your beautiful attempt ~ congratulations on your placement. Sending you light and love always, hugsz 🧜‍♀️🧜‍♀️💫💫💜💜
Smith  Avatar
August 7, 2026 at 6:13 AM
Thank you for your contest and judging. Also thank you for this beautiful comment. 💝💫🌹
Anaya Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 10:57 AM
Soulful strumming as she is the music the harp the hymm. Beautifully expressed. Congratulations on your placement, Alison! 🌸 fave
Smith  Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 3:23 PM
Thank you Anaya ❤️⭐
MITRA Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 12:45 AM
A truly evocative hymn of the inner life. The poem transforms the heart from a mere vessel of emotion into a living instrument—one that must be broken open before it can release its deepest music. I was especially moved by the progression from pain to revelation: “Each note, a kiss. / Each chord, a wound.” As a guitarist myself, I felt the profound musical truth within those words. Yet the chord here is not diminished; it is 'augmented'—stretched beyond ordinary resolution, carrying both ache and ascent, dissonance and transcendence. That is precisely where this poem finds its power: in refusing to let suffering diminish the heart, allowing it instead to expand its own resonance. The imagery of hibiscus, violin, opera, and marrow creates a rich symphony where nature, body, and spirit merge. The final transformation of the heart becoming “the hymn itself” feels earned, not merely declared. A graceful, passionate, and deeply musical piece—one that does not simply describe a song of the heart, but allows the reader to hear it.
Smith  Avatar
July 31, 2026 at 1:03 AM
Thank you - your words have deeply moved me.🌹
Jones Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 12:53 AM
Beautifully written using many of the prompts! You’re sure to do well in the contest! Great job!
Smith  Avatar
July 30, 2026 at 2:20 AM
Thank you very much Karen
Watson Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 12:08 AM
Beautifully written with wonderfully chosen words. I was swimming in emotion. It's one of my favs! Congratulations on making the top 100!
Smith  Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 12:44 AM
Thank you Jeff you overwhelm me with your comments.
The Primordial Poet Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 1:38 PM
This is wonderful....congrats on making the top 100 list
Smith  Avatar
July 28, 2026 at 5:42 PM
Thank you Michael.
Hind Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 10:11 PM
lovely
Smith  Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 10:18 PM
Thanks Paige for all your lovely visits to my page.
Wolf Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 9:09 PM
Absolutely breathtaking, Alison. Emotion-laden fine poetry. A FAVE for me. Bravo! ~ Gershon
Smith  Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 2:35 AM
Wow thank you Gershon much appreciated.
Crandall Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 3:25 PM
beautiful job of incorporating all those prompts!
Smith  Avatar
July 18, 2026 at 7:16 PM
Thanks David its not always easy.
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