Tim Ryerson Poet Monorhyme

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Vacant Eyes

How come daddy? How can this possibly be?
Why do you stare straight ahead, not looking at me?
Remember me daddy? Remember me please...


Submitted for: Capcha Contest sponsored by Judy Konos

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Laura Breidenthal May 25, 2015 at 9:59 PM Powerful piece... heart-tugging....great verse! Always, Laura

Skat A April 30, 2015 at 6:16 PM Nice win Tim. Forever ~SKAT~

Casarah Nance April 29, 2015 at 5:22 PM aww this made the hands on my arms stand up....wow. well done my friend.

Sandra Haight April 28, 2015 at 7:48 PM Congratulations on our win, Tim. Such a powerful message your words send. Heart-wrenching. Sandra

Andrea Dietrich April 28, 2015 at 4:13 PM Heart wrenching one, Tim. I enjoyed your playful comment on my poem!

Jan Allison April 28, 2015 at 3:55 PM oh so so heartbreaking Tim:-( congrats on your win Tim:-) Hugs Jan xx

Edward Ebbs April 28, 2015 at 2:29 PM Powerful Tim, congrats :)

Poet Destroyer A April 28, 2015 at 1:38 PM congrats on your win Tim, nice entry for the CAPTCHA CONTEST

Eileen Manassian April 28, 2015 at 12:10 PM WOW, Tim...what a powerful write. I'm just taken by this. Lovely and sad....A lesson for all here. Hugs to you.

Judy Konos April 28, 2015 at 11:55 AM Thank you for entering my contest.

Jaycee Cervenka April 28, 2015 at 8:09 AM Tim, I really like the message and the voice used for this. You captured the small child well. A nice reminder to pay attention!~Jan