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Hushed (Nonet form) The Loon glided across the water Calling across the lake loudly Then, it dove under water Leaving ripples behind It surfaced again Looking around Peacefully It sat Hushed Heidi Sands 7/26/17

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John Michaels

Date: 7/27/2017 4:29:00 PM

I enjoy a good Nonet - very nicely written... captures the tranquility of the scene perfectly. Well done. Regards, John.

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/27/2017 4:31:00 PM

Thank you John. That was my first one :)

Paul Callus

Date: 7/26/2017 3:47:00 PM

What a beautiful image you have projected through your words, Heidi! A lovely Nonet which emits a feeling of calm and serenity. Regards // paul

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/26/2017 4:01:00 PM

Thank you Paul. I am happy it emits a feeling of calm and serenity. I couldn't ask for more. :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/26/2017 1:04:00 PM

HI Heidi, Two of my favorite things, birds and peace, very nice:)

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/26/2017 1:17:00 PM

Thank you Mike. I am glad I could bring you these 2 things, then. :)

Akkina Downing

Date: 7/26/2017 12:53:00 PM

So peaceful like. Makes me want to get off work now and go meditate by the lake Ronkonkoma. Lol! I enjoyed this Miss Heidi :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 7/26/2017 1:01:00 PM

Hi Akkina. Truthfully, I love to write to bring people things so I am so happy it brought you a peaceful feeling and that you enjoyed it. Thank you and have a nice day :)