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Hush the Body Breaks

it's not injury jury's in it's all in your head MagiCicada 13

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 6/29/2018 1:30:00 PM

EXCELLENT.

Anil Deo

Date: 6/25/2018 6:46:00 AM

JURY out and IN; INJURY .... word play like I ought o have seen. (My spiritual envy third Eye, makes an unholy trinity with natural ones) shalom, shalom/Paz

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/25/2018 8:23:00 AM

My third eye is the red one with the dilated pupil ;p xomo!

John Lawless

Date: 6/23/2018 7:28:00 AM

...and how do you get the goose out of the bottle.....nicely done - good word play and ..... keep writing

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/23/2018 7:41:00 AM

By breaking one or the other's neck I suppose. Thank you John. Or... "there is no goose" or bottle for that matter. ;) xomo!

Lyric Man

Date: 6/22/2018 10:24:00 PM

Maureen, another well worded, clever write!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/23/2018 7:34:00 AM

Thank you Lyric Man! :) xomo

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/22/2018 2:30:00 PM

Impressive dear, Maureen xxx

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/23/2018 7:32:00 AM

Thank you my friend, xomo <3

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/22/2018 2:03:00 PM

You summed it up well Maureen, I hadn't known about it until you mentioned it in a previous poem. Tom.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/23/2018 7:32:00 AM

Thank you Tom :) xomo

P.M. Richter

Date: 6/22/2018 1:41:00 PM

Very clever Maureen

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/23/2018 7:31:00 AM

Thank you P.M. :) xomo

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 6/22/2018 11:32:00 AM

Really so. Educative. Regards.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 6/23/2018 7:23:00 AM

Thank you Rajat :) xomo