Hush the Body Breaks

it's not injury

                                        jury's in

                                it's all in your head






MagiCicada 13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dutta Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 1:30 PM
EXCELLENT.
Deo Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 6:46 AM
JURY out and IN; INJURY .... word play like I ought o have seen. (My spiritual envy third Eye, makes an unholy trinity with natural ones) shalom, shalom/Paz
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June 25, 2018 at 8:23 AM
My third eye is the red one with the dilated pupil ;p xomo!
Lawless Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 7:28 AM
...and how do you get the goose out of the bottle.....nicely done - good word play and ..... keep writing
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 23, 2018 at 7:41 AM
By breaking one or the other's neck I suppose. Thank you John. Or... "there is no goose" or bottle for that matter. ;) xomo!
Man Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 10:24 PM
Maureen, another well worded, clever write!
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June 23, 2018 at 7:34 AM
Thank you Lyric Man! :) xomo
Trifiatis Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 2:30 PM
Impressive dear, Maureen xxx
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June 23, 2018 at 7:32 AM
Thank you my friend, xomo <3
Cunningham Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 2:03 PM
You summed it up well Maureen, I hadn't known about it until you mentioned it in a previous poem. Tom.
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June 23, 2018 at 7:32 AM
Thank you Tom :) xomo
Marc Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 1:41 PM
Very clever Maureen
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June 23, 2018 at 7:31 AM
Thank you P.M. :) xomo
Chakrabarty Avatar
June 22, 2018 at 11:32 AM
Really so. Educative. Regards.
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June 23, 2018 at 7:23 AM
Thank you Rajat :) xomo
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