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Hush the Body Breaks

it's not injury jury's in it's all in your head MagiCicada 13

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Anisha Dutta
Date: 6/29/2018 1:30:00 PM
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EXCELLENT.
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Anil Deo
Date: 6/25/2018 6:46:00 AM
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JURY out and IN; INJURY .... word play like I ought o have seen. (My spiritual envy third Eye, makes an unholy trinity with natural ones) shalom, shalom/Paz
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/25/2018 8:23:00 AM
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My third eye is the red one with the dilated pupil ;p xomo!
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John Lawless
Date: 6/23/2018 7:28:00 AM
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...and how do you get the goose out of the bottle.....nicely done - good word play and ..... keep writing
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/23/2018 7:41:00 AM
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By breaking one or the other's neck I suppose. Thank you John. Or... "there is no goose" or bottle for that matter. ;) xomo!
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Lyric Man
Date: 6/22/2018 10:24:00 PM
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Maureen, another well worded, clever write!
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/23/2018 7:34:00 AM
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Thank you Lyric Man! :) xomo
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 6/22/2018 2:30:00 PM
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Impressive dear, Maureen xxx
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/23/2018 7:32:00 AM
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Thank you my friend, xomo <3
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 6/22/2018 2:03:00 PM
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You summed it up well Maureen, I hadn't known about it until you mentioned it in a previous poem. Tom.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/23/2018 7:32:00 AM
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Thank you Tom :) xomo
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P.M. Richter
Date: 6/22/2018 1:41:00 PM
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Very clever Maureen
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/23/2018 7:31:00 AM
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Thank you P.M. :) xomo
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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty
Date: 6/22/2018 11:32:00 AM
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Really so. Educative. Regards.
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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 6/23/2018 7:23:00 AM
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Thank you Rajat :) xomo

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