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This is for those hopelessly in love with whatever they want in life

Hurt Me Now

Hurt me, crush me, smash me to bits, 
You break every bit of my mind,
Then you build me up to tear me down, 
Leaving me deaf, dumb and blind,

To every emotional thoughtful gift,
Those feelings of life in my heart,
What you do with your words and your beautiful smile, 
Tears my love all apart,

I love you, I fear you, you’re my mysterious want, 
You’re everything, my total extreme,
And I see you each night, destroying me more, 
Each night when I drift off to dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Mhangwa Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 2:17 AM
I can easily relate to this Lewis! Very touching, brilliant write my friend
Raynes Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 5:47 AM
Thanks Kudzai, glad you like this one.
S     Avatar
November 22, 2017 at 11:30 PM
Beautiful Lewis!! Love that hurts :’(
Raynes Avatar
November 23, 2017 at 12:42 AM
Thanks Judy, love can hurt lots
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