Hurt Feelings

Off a lovely brown horse, I once fell off! My derrière in pain why did friends scoff? 5/10/2022

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Joe Dimino

Date: 5/13/2022 6:51:00 AM

Who knows? I often laugh at my own mishaps -- once the sting goes away. Fun read! Life can be a symphony of pratfalls -- Dick Van Dyke turned them into a fortune.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/13/2022 6:52:00 PM

Prince! Love the quote from Dick! I met him when he was shopping in the Marina in San Francisco! I just stopped him and said, “Dick van Dyke”...he said...”And you are??” So I introduced myself. Golly, he was so pleasant, affable and approachable. He was in town for the musical, “ The Music Man.” I asked,how it was going? He said the show was doing him in, he told me it was exhausting! He was in his 50s at the time. You gave me an idea for a poem, thanks. Pangie PS what a lovely, humble man he was. Such a twinkle In his eyes! );

Elena Eagle

Date: 5/12/2022 2:02:00 PM

This was fun to read. Enjoyed it.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/13/2022 6:36:00 PM

Exactly. Just postested for that reason. Pangie

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/11/2022 11:56:00 AM

Ouch! That must have hurt Pangie! Deep bruises are no fun! Hope you and the horse were able to ride off without any further mishaps! Sore buns - no fun!

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/11/2022 3:52:00 PM

Ouch is right. I am one, not into pain. That was my last time on a horse. Sore buns, ouch, ouch! Pangie

Eve Roper

Date: 5/10/2022 10:44:00 PM

When I was young a road a Shetland Pony, it wasn't fun, I was sore, last time I got close to a horse. Enjoyed reading my friend. Haven't been in the mood for writing.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/11/2022 3:49:00 PM

I have not written much lately, either! I don’t think we should necessarily read the latest poem of anyone. Both of us have tons of poetry besides todays. It seems people get stuck on today’s poem, only? Poems are not like buns))) the ones in the past are neither moldy or hard!Nor garbage. But I know what you mean about not being in the mood, for sure. Also had a horse go running and I could not stop him. Reminded me of again!)) Your friend, Pangie.

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/10/2022 5:27:00 PM

Kids will be kids won't they? I stomped by a horse, so painful Miss Panagiota, I was only 11 and only one foot was hurt. but I forgave because the owner was mounting me on the right side. As you can see, in my picture, I am wearing horse shoe diamond necklace...they scoffed at Liz Taylor!

I Am Anaya
Date: 5/11/2022 4:50:00 PM

I thought you would like a quote by Lady Labyrinth! "Darling it can't all be sunshine and roses..." ;) Leanne Lovejoy-Burton

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/11/2022 4:08:00 PM

Anaya! You need to write comedy! That was some comment. You kill me with the Liz earrings ...you have no boundaries in thinking. Quite enjoyable. Pangie

Vickey Rhymer

Date: 5/10/2022 5:03:00 PM

Dear friend I'm afraid it is the nature of the beast.Enjoyed your couplet.Does that help?

Panagiota Romios
Date: 5/11/2022 2:33:00 PM

Dearest Vickey! I liked your comment! It was not just words in a rush! It has feelings for the writer,,,,and Her derrière! -)) Thank you! Pangie