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Hurry up my dear, now. Hasten, I’ll show you how. Habitually late! High time, they will not wait. History, you will see. Haste is a courtesy. Honestly please hurry!

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Terry Miller

Date: 9/9/2023 12:59:00 AM

Joyous, great write; congratulations.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/9/2023 4:53:00 AM

Thanks so much Terry, cheers from SV

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/8/2023 2:02:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win, S.V. :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/8/2023 2:17:00 AM

I was pleased with my 3rd placing and thank you, but yours was wonderful and richly deserved the 1st place it was awarded my friend. Cheers SV

Ink Empress

Date: 9/8/2023 1:21:00 AM

Omg i love that cute pic, although im scared of mice, i love turtles, i remember when i was little i had turtles as pets, and i used to swim with them, even when young, and funny thing is i thought they would turn into ninja turtles lol everyday i hoped, silly childhood tales. And as for Your Pleiades, i love those h words especially “ history you will see” this is creative and conveys a message. Powerful. Congratulations . You even rhymed here ugh queen of rhymes

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/8/2023 2:13:00 AM

Of course I rhymed !! If my poems don't rhyme they are not poetry and I am not their poet ! lol Out of all my 99 posted poems on here, only one doesn't rhyme. That's because Seeker insisted on Free verse for his contest. Thanx for your lovely comment Empress. It honestly touches my heart that a poet of your caliber takes the time to read my humble little poems. :)

Kim Merryman

Date: 9/7/2023 5:52:00 PM

Your Pleiades matches the picture so well! Delightful! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/7/2023 6:33:00 PM

I had to "twig" the picture a bit Kim ( I usually do) I added the hour glass and clock. Thank you for your congrats. Even though the judges cant see the picture, I take pride in presenting them well. Its half the fun of posting a poem. SV :)

Joseph May

Date: 9/7/2023 3:58:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Very nicely penned

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/7/2023 6:35:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words and placement in your contest Joseph.

Valsa George

Date: 9/5/2023 2:11:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this poem and seeing this image ! Humorous, clever and thought provoking simultaneously ! All the Best sweet friend !

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/5/2023 3:06:00 PM

Glad you liked it sweet one. Just a bit of fun. Of course I had to make it Rhyme. Thank you for your lovely comment.

Tom Woody

Date: 9/4/2023 12:24:00 PM

Well, he's talking to a turtle so... Cute H stuff SV

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/4/2023 1:18:00 PM

Well it was either going to be a mouse and a turtle, hurrying OR the big bad wolf with lots of "H"uffing & puffing blowing "H"ouses in .... The mouse won !! Thanks for your comment Tom.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/4/2023 10:42:00 AM

This was very well done. I love this form. Blessings.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/4/2023 11:46:00 AM

Hi Victor Thanks for your Comment. How are you keeping? Well I hope. Best wishes from SV

Jay Narain

Date: 9/4/2023 10:34:00 AM

Nice Pleaides poem. Great write.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/4/2023 11:45:00 AM

aww Thanks Jay. I appreciated your comment. Best wishes SV

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/4/2023 7:55:00 AM

Good day SV. I found this, alongside the picture, endearing. This is a new form for me but it looks fun! I agree with Sotto - it is enchanting. I loved it. Put a smile :) on my face. Very best of luck to you with the competition. Hugs and more smiles from one who rhymes to another xx

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/4/2023 11:44:00 AM

Hi Christina, glad you liked it. I know it isn't contest worthy, but it was fun. No marvelous descriptive words ..lol. but my creed is, if you cant be as good at least be different. It was fun adding the clock and hour glass to the little picture I found. Thanks heaps for your lovely comment. Best wishes SV

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/4/2023 4:42:00 AM

I absolutely like your Pleiades poem, SV! It is truly enchanting, with the 'H' charm shining beautifully throughout. The way you choose to present the exploration of imagery and interpretations is unique and captivating, adding a touch of sweetness and humor to the whole poem.

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/4/2023 7:02:00 AM

Thank you SP. The poor little poem has to stand on its own. The judge wont see a picture, just my understated lil rhyming Pleiades. It was fun doing it though. Thank you for your comment.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/4/2023 1:55:00 AM

Oh what an intriguing and profound take for the contest dear SV, this definitely held my eyes and mind captivated throughout.. Quite interesting and fun-filled especially with that photo.. A beautifully written pleiades, love this! :)

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/4/2023 2:47:00 AM

I always say " if you cant be as good, be different !" Thanks for your lovely comment Hiya.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/4/2023 1:28:00 AM

- This one was really sweet and funny, S.V. :) - Love the photo :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs

Speaks Volumes
Date: 9/4/2023 2:49:00 AM

Thnx sweet Anne-Lise. Glad you liked it. You know me, it has to rhyme....Just for fun. SV