Hurricanes

All you do 
All you say
All you write
In the jasmine garden
Is a frenzied drum
Bludgeoning me to dumb

Intensely numb
I feel
As I reel

Yes
As you come
Rising on tides
Passion overflowing
Deluge in the veins
In a hurricane
You dominate
You violate
You annihilate
My stability
My balance
My tranquility
My nonchalance


You seek to 
Sweep me off my feet
I resist
To be devastatingly kissed

Who does want
A plundered restaurant
I hold breath
But you hit underneath
With your tremendous vigour
A wild rigour

Breaking all norm
Of rhythm and form
You become
The fierce Atlantic storm

From head to toe
Fast or slow
Everything you claim
You monster hurricane

In a primitive joy
You destroy
Spears and arrows you employ
Pull down and enjoy

In a poor coordination
I reach my limitation
And surrender
Before your violence
And horror

Frantically you tear
All the roses there
The tendrils of hair
The hymns of prayer
Whether in Florida
Or in Miami
Riding on reckless liberty
Everywhere the same misery

Either Katrina or Irene
Harvey or Irma
The same surging ocean
The same commotion
You flood me with
I groan beneath
I have to writhe
And wriggle as fiercely you breathe


Well now as you are quieted
Having deconstructed
All my emotions
Are now back to the ocean

Give me your resilience
The ocean’s brilliance
Let me reconstruct and create
My new cup and chocolate
My balance
In the new circumstance

In future if you need to come
Come with tribal drum
Played by striking with sticks
In the nerves crimson kicks
Come in drizzling ice and gentle rains
Not in tornadoes and hurricanes
Please …

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Date: 9/14/2017 2:16:00 AM
Many congrats on your win and POTD Probir. A very timely theme which sadly many people can relate to:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/14/2017 6:43:00 AM
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Congratulations on your awesome win , Probir, Hugs
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Date: 9/14/2017 6:48:00 AM
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Date: 9/13/2017 8:20:00 PM
Wonderful, Probir. Congrats on POTD. I love your images and the entire hurricane conceit, and how you work with rhyme, unobtrusively. Lovely lovely poem.
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Back again... Congratulations on POTD honors my friend Probir! Well deserved:)
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Congratulations on POTD, Probir, well deserved ~`*
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This is beautiful. Congrats on POTD.
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Congrats!!! My friend on Potd...excellent job Probir...god bless...WW
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Date: 9/13/2017 8:59:00 AM
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Seductive write! Well done Probir, a very engaging read, congrats on potd xomo!
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Congratulations on your well deserved win and achieving POTD Probir, excellent poem. :)
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Congratulations on POTD Probir, so well deserved....Maria
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Back with congrats Probir on your POTD honor!
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- A unique poem Propir - So well written - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Congratulations on your win, Probir.
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Date: 9/14/2017 6:55:00 AM
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Date: 9/12/2017 2:45:00 PM
Brilliantly creative poem, Probir. The use of hurricane as a metaphor for love/desire is a stroke of genius. You pen paints the quiet tranquil along w/the torrential storminess. Such an excellent piece of prose. An instant fave for sure. Stellar bright poetry.
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Date: 9/12/2017 10:09:00 AM
I knew you'd win! Congrats, Probir!
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Date: 9/12/2017 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations Probir :)
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Date: 9/12/2017 9:19:00 AM
Congrats Probir on your big win!
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Date: 9/12/2017 3:42:00 AM
A very well expressed poem. Regards. Mpho Kgaswane.
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Date: 9/11/2017 8:50:00 PM
Every line a fierce beauty in your poem 'Hurricanes' Probir! An awesome write of grandeur and grace poetically expressed with the refined power of your rhythm and flow. Well done my friend! :)
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Date: 9/11/2017 8:46:00 AM
I have faved this! You deserve the win and I hope you are chosen as POTD! This was fantastic, my friend!!!!!
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Date: 9/11/2017 7:40:00 AM
Lovely Probir--good luck for a win!
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Date: 9/11/2017 7:09:00 AM
Well written Probir! :)
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