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They say we’ll get a hurricane,
that they’re calling hurricane Lee.
Probably later this week,
and it’s a category 9 at least.

Some are saying prayers, but I say:
Why’s God sending it here?
Someone must be sinning a LOT.
Hey, don’t look at me - I’m not.

You’d think that would affect our classes,
that maybe we’d get hazzard passes,
for assignments that are due,
but nope, it isn’t true.

“I don’t want to hear excuses,”
my chem professor said,
“the only acceptable excuse is,
that you’re dead.”

They say we’ll get a hurricane, that they’re calling hurricane Lee. Probably later this week, and it’s a category 9 at least. Some are saying prayers, but I say: Why’s God sending it here? Someone must be sinning a LOT. Hey, don’t look at me - I’m not. You’d think that would affect our classes, that maybe we’d get hazzard passes, for assignments that are due, but nope, it isn’t true. “I don’t want to hear excuses,” my chem professor said, “the only acceptable excuse is, that you’re dead.”

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Date: 9/12/2023 7:23:00 AM
What is it about chemistry teachers. Do they just hate everyone? Glad I blew mine up. No help from hurricane needed.
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Anais Vionet
Date: 9/12/2023 8:12:00 AM
Dooh!
Date: 9/11/2023 1:54:00 PM
Interesting use of repetition. I live in a part of the country that doesn't get impacted by hurricanes or earthquakes. Sometimes tornadoes. Be safe and pass this message on to your chem lab professor - L <<<< paste that to yer forehead dude. Heck, you earned it
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Tom Woody
Date: 9/11/2023 2:41:00 PM
It's implied in any case
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Anais Vionet
Date: 9/11/2023 2:22:00 PM
Like he’d stand still long enough for THAT =]

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