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Hurricane Irma and Us

Hurricane Irma and us Do not fear my dearest one I’ll hold you close despite the winds That blow and rend with its deluge Ogres captured Mother Nature And held her hostage with their scheme I bastioned you against our plight An inundation with a flood Large trees are ripped off from their roots The ogres blew the roofs off tops The window shutters shook aloud The winds have stilled and we are safe The hurricane has ceased to be A calmness greets us with it’s peace Your’e better now without the strife I must get back to see my wife Hurricane Contest Sponsored by Julie Rodeheaver September 10, 2017 *We have actually been ravaged by hurricane Irma and we were homebound for 30 hours wth minimal damage and I wrote two poems near a Coleman lamp. I used poetic license with the wife (ha ha)

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Date: 9/14/2017 9:58:00 AM
Great write my friend...those pesky hurricanes...stay dry and safe Ralph...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 9/14/2017 9:44:00 AM
Hi JAN: I missed the contest.
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Date: 9/14/2017 9:41:00 AM
Hi Jan: Thank you: Of course many areas in Florida were devastated including people close to me but we are trying to make the best of it. The use of satire in poetry can lighten the load. There have deaths as a result. This is my fourth hurricane.
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Date: 9/14/2017 2:56:00 AM
Great take on the contest theme Ralph I'm glad you could retain your sense of humour during what must have been a terrifying experience as i love the line about the wife lol. Just glad you are safe:-):-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/13/2017 7:28:00 PM
You did well Ralph--the Coleman lamp works well--glad you are safe!
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Date: 9/13/2017 4:09:00 PM
I'm glad you and your wife did well through the storm. I was in Harvey so I know the feeling... my heart knew we would be fine, but heartbroken at the so many that are left with nothing... their lives changed in a matter of hours.. Your imagery is great in this poem nicely done... ~`*
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Date: 9/13/2017 4:56:00 PM
Hi Eve: Thanks for your comment. obviously there have been deaths because of all the storms and hurricanes.The magic word is satire that comedians always use bur carefully.

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