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Hurricane Epic Flooding

Hurricane Epic Flooding Alerts; emergency evacuation is advised for people to leave their homes. Some people stayed; secured and board up windows, sandbags against the doors. Prayers were said; “We will be OK, no reason to leave.” were their replies. Shadow of darkness slowly crawled over the neighborhoods. The coarsen tempest struck shattering the silent calm, gales moaned and thrashed with downpours of heavy rain, slowly water raised filling every drainage ditch. In shock, tears start to flow as they watch the water rise up in their yard creeping closer to their homes. The downpour of rain doesn’t relent; the cursed howling winds get stronger. Weep holes on the brick siding lets water seep inside the home, never thought to seal the holes as water trickles in. The day turns into two, then three, then four, still brown rancid water fills the streets eddying around front doors and lapping at windows. “Why didn't we heed the warnings? “ The water is up to our waist, belongings float inside our homes! The streets have turned into rivers and the water have nowhere to go. The whole city is underwater and the scent of cold death is in the air. 9/9/2017

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Date: 9/14/2017 3:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Eve, we in the UK have very changeable weather but nothing as horrific as the images within your poem, so well written.
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Date: 9/13/2017 1:19:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your most deserved top win ... Vivid and fantastic ...
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Date: 9/12/2017 11:53:00 PM
Congratulations, Eve on your win. Fantastic description.
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Date: 9/12/2017 6:29:00 PM
powerful descriptive write Eve i am just so glad you are all ok:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/12/2017 4:29:00 PM
Congrats Eve on a very descriptive write, which really highlights the folly of not evacuating, well deserved win!
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Date: 9/12/2017 3:25:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your fine win. With such vivid detail it deserved first place.
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Date: 9/12/2017 12:34:00 PM
A very powerful - and sad - write, Eve, especially the last line. Such a horrible experience for people to endure. Congratulations on your First-Place win. Regards, John.
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Date: 9/12/2017 12:28:00 PM
Beautiful write...
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Date: 9/12/2017 10:07:00 AM
Excellent write, Eve! These disasters load up with so much baggage! Congrats!
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Date: 9/12/2017 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations Eve ! :)
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Date: 9/12/2017 9:19:00 AM
Congrats Eve on your big win!
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Date: 9/12/2017 7:39:00 AM
Well done Eve for this great win; love the "coarsen tempest" description and all the water-logged images.
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Date: 9/11/2017 8:13:00 PM
I think at some point in your life you have experienced this. Your descriptions are so vivid. They could not have come just from CNN. Great write.
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/11/2017 8:42:00 PM
Thank you, Janis, yes during hurricane Harvey. My sister and her two sons were under 2 feet of water in their down stairs apartment. They broke into a vacant one upstairs she was very ill at the time. Besides so many 1000 of others.. I was one of the lucky ones..
Date: 9/10/2017 7:50:00 AM
Very powerful Eve and I have a special tear in my eye for the pets and the animals
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Date: 9/10/2017 2:49:00 AM
Very appropriate depiction of peoples' misery uncared nature inflicts.
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Date: 9/9/2017 10:37:00 PM
I have been following on the news, so terrible, hope you are safe and everyone is safe, I have seen such great stories on the news of people helping people, great poem!
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/9/2017 10:48:00 PM
Oh, thank you, Arthur,, Being one of the lucky ones, I only had my roof leak. I feel very guilty because so many around me has lost so much. I did have to wait in the lines for bread, milk, eggs and so on... the gas pumps empty, the roads damaged from the storm... ~`*
Date: 9/9/2017 10:14:00 PM
You captured this story and the effects of hurricane so well..good luck for the contest Eve!
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/9/2017 10:53:00 PM
Thank you,Vijay, living it was the horror .. Hugs Eve ~`*,
Date: 9/9/2017 9:54:00 PM
Thanks for your comments, Eve. Thanks for this hurricane piece. Truly there is so much to say, so much to pray.
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/9/2017 10:52:00 PM
You are very welcome, Curtis, you have beautiful write.. Hugs Eve ~`*,
Date: 9/9/2017 9:54:00 PM
This is such a powerful and sad write my friend! A very good entry into the contest Eve! I really enjoyed reading you masterful poem here this evening! What a brilliant piece, such a stunning poem, Great Work!!
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/9/2017 10:50:00 PM
Oh, thank you, Russell, living it help me write the verse. Hugs Eve ~`*,

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