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Hurricane

Hurricanes


blow away our canes

stumbling us down on the ground

rise to walk again


rebuilding places

like a midrib broom as one

the sun shines again




Nov. 7, 2012  

Note: This Haiku was inspired by the theme of the previous contest of SandyIvy, with theme, Hurricane.  It came late because of my PC problem. 

Honorable Mention
Contest: Your Best Haiku
Judged: 11/18/2012
Sponsor: Poet Nathan A

Second Place
Contest: November's Poem
Judged: 11/26/2012
Sponsor: Poet PD

Copyright © Len Gasun | Year Posted 2012

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/28/2013 1:43:00 PM Stopping by to say hello my sweet and wonderful sis.. I'm working on my computers microphone it is sweet and awesome.. *always~ :-) PD Login to Reply

Reggae Magnet Date: 12/25/2012 7:43:00 AM Like the topic, covered this also. lets hope you were't blown away. ice write, will read more. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/6/2012 6:50:00 PM Hi Leo,,, heading to bed in a minute... stopping by to leave you hugs,, xox~ always & forever... your sis-ie PD Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/3/2012 1:12:00 PM Congratulations on your "November Poem" contest win Leonora. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 11/30/2012 6:38:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Nathan's "Your Best Haiku" contest Leonora. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/29/2012 5:58:00 PM a well deserved win I see here, Leonora. BIG congrats on PD's winners list. Login to Reply

S.Jagathsimhan Nair Date: 11/28/2012 6:44:00 AM Congrats, Leonora, on this top win!! Jag Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 11/27/2012 2:42:00 PM A spectacular hope emanates from these winning lines! Congrats, Leonora! :) gwendolen Login to Reply

Olusegun Arowolo Date: 11/27/2012 2:03:00 PM Splendid and wonderful piece,Leonora...Nice haiku....Congratulations on your 2nd place superb win in this contest....And thanks for your wonderful comments on my poems.You are so dear and amiable.Kudos to you,my dear friend... Login to Reply

Bukang Liwayway Date: 11/27/2012 9:39:00 AM Congratulations my dear friend for winning 2nd place...cheers!!! :) Login to Reply

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 11/27/2012 1:34:00 AM Congratulations hun on another winning place, hugs xx Login to Reply

Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/26/2012 10:16:00 PM Leonara, congrats again to this fascinating haiku :D- Hug, Yanny Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/26/2012 9:37:00 PM Hello Leonora, . Congratulations :-) with your winning poem.. Thank you for the awesome NOVEMBER'S poem entry.. good night sis... luv~pd Login to Reply

Yanny Widjanarko Date: 11/22/2012 5:27:00 PM belated congrats of your haiku dear Leonora - Hug, Yanny Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/21/2012 11:12:00 AM Congrats on your great win..Sara Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 11/21/2012 6:10:00 AM congrats on your win Leonora Login to Reply

Gail Debole Date: 11/20/2012 3:50:00 PM Hello Leonora - Many congrats on your win! - Gail Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/19/2012 9:56:00 PM hey, this must be a brand new one!! Big congrats to you. And I especially like that first one. it's so cute. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/19/2012 2:45:00 PM Hello, Leo,,, my poetry sister... how are you... aweee... I did not know you missed the contest.... Nathan, got good taste when it comes to his wins... LOL..love being on the top of his list,,, of course he only picked my poem, cause he enjoyed the chain... :-) congratulations with your good enough haiku... xox~PD Login to Reply

Bukang Liwayway Date: 11/19/2012 8:24:00 AM Congratulations on your win my dear friend Norie, God bless you always and advance Merry Merry Christmas to you. mwauh!! Love, Mary Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 11/19/2012 2:03:00 AM CONGRATS LEONORA ON WINNING AN HM FOR THIS MAJESTIC HAIKU DEAR FRIEND .. WISHING U AND FAMILY A VERY HAPPY AND BLESSED THANKSGIVING LUV. Login to Reply

Nathan D. Date: 11/18/2012 9:38:00 PM good haiku' Nate Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/17/2012 5:59:00 PM Great work..Enjoyed reading it..I am sure that it would have been on the winners' list if it had been an entry..Thanks for the visits to my blog and my poems..Sara Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 11/17/2012 7:52:00 AM these are excellent, Leonora Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 11/13/2012 12:24:00 PM Hello, sisie... how are you? I did not even see you had this poem. Sorry, to hear you missed the contest... :-( I bet sindy would have loved this haiku... The sun always brings out the new in another day... sorry to hear about your PC... xox~pd Login to Reply

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