Hunting Season

A gaggle of wild geese flies in the bright morning sky,
quickly the bald, smirking hunter raises his rifle high;
but in his ineptitude he hits a different target instead, 
his old hunting buddy resting peacefully in the shade.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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Adeite Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 4:10 AM
Congrats on having your poem being featured on the poetry Soup Homepage this week, please keep your poetry pen alive and keep painting your poetry pad with colors of creativity and paints of passion. You’ve got it! Love, always Adeleke
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July 28, 2010 at 2:11 PM
That be a goose of a different kind. Congrats on the selection. Dave
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July 26, 2010 at 6:07 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Fred. Love, Carol
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