Huntin Seeson One

wilbur went hunting for goose
winnie’s goosey got loose
wilbur shot it
winnie had fit
around wilbur’s neck a tight noose
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 23, 2016 at 4:50 PM
Lol! This is funny. Wilbur will know next time:-)Alexis
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October 23, 2016 at 9:54 PM
I dunno, Wibur is a slow learner;-)
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October 23, 2016 at 2:54 PM
Lol!
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October 23, 2016 at 9:53 PM
Hi Mike! glad ya got a chuckle
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October 23, 2016 at 9:47 AM
The noose was wrapped around so tight...to get himself free he did fight...as he tugged.... it's fibers hugged....until he saw the brightest lights
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October 23, 2016 at 9:53 PM
The brightest lights are just before blackout? jus sayin;-) Jack'd say it's no use to struggle:-)
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October 23, 2016 at 8:40 AM
That'll learn him! :)
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October 23, 2016 at 9:52 PM
Well, you know us boys...we're slow learners
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