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Hunter Stars

HUNTER STARS Fears half-hid behind curtain, faces sallow, Two small kids shivering at the cold open window. We look trembling at the stars across the black - A thousand guys in the dark searching for our track, Each with tiny red or yellow flashlight - Steady, pulsing, dim, or bright. Brighter ones are closer - in groups or alone; Far-off ones are completely unknown. Special guys like Antares or Arcturus Spinning, searching in circles around us. Big fellows like the Hunter Orion Getting closer with dogs Sirius and Procyon : Sometimes they can’t see us for cloud, Can’t hear us as we bravely whisper aloud ‘You tiny hunters don’t scare us ; you’ll run In the morning when you see our sun.’ . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written for Judy Konos's Contest "A Short Poem" by Sydney Peck

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/18/2011 1:24:00 PM
oops, I just saw I already congratulated this one a while back. So many lists to see I forget which ones I already congratulated! Hope you are doing well this week! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 5/18/2011 1:22:00 PM
congratulations, Sydney. Finally seeing this winners list. A very well deserved win indeed!
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:24:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Judy's contest Syd. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/13/2011 1:51:00 PM
Bringing humanistic features to the skies is a brilliant idea, Syd. Magical and playful! Congratulations on a worthy win. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/13/2011 6:35:00 AM
Wonderful poetry about space. A Great win.
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Date: 5/12/2011 10:05:00 AM
I love poems about space, Syd, and really enjoyed reading about your thoughts on the stars, Syd. Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:25:00 AM
This is beautiful Sydney.Congrats...
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:17:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Judy, Sydney
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Date: 5/11/2011 7:55:00 PM
oh, that last part was really cute, Sydney. I am happy to see you at the TOP where you rightly belong. You are a superb writer!
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Date: 5/11/2011 6:53:00 PM
Thank you for being in my contest
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Date: 5/11/2011 4:01:00 PM
Congrats Syd on your great win in Short Poem contest.. enjoy another sweet victory luv..
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Date: 5/11/2011 3:48:00 PM
What a pleasure to see the stars with eyes of a child....you brought them down to earth with this poem! Nicely done!! Congrats!
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Date: 5/11/2011 2:42:00 PM
Very good. Congrats
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