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Placed 2nd in Tania Kitchin's New Funny or Bawdy Limerick Set Contest     May 25, 2024

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Hungry, Then Horny

Wife was feeling neglected and bored.
Hubby hugged her. Her low spirits soared.  
     She cooed, “Let’s go to bed.”
     When he said, “Well, instead,
would you bring me some food?” she was floored.

Soon she came back buck-naked and bold
with a meal. Such a sight to behold!
     Hubby said, “Lunch can wait.”
     When he went for the bait,
She said, “Not now~~your food would get cold.”
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Miller Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 3:52 AM
Very funny, well written, congratulations
Canerdy Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 5:27 PM
Thanks SO much, Terry. Janice
Dietrich Avatar
May 26, 2024 at 3:19 PM
Love this! Congrats to you
Canerdy Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 5:26 PM
Thanks a million, Andrea. Janice
Woods Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 7:01 PM
Yess!!! Loved this one! First place in my book heehee! Great Limerick..
Kitchin Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 1:42 PM
Janice, congratulations on your top placement with your funny limerick set!
Canerdy Avatar
May 27, 2024 at 5:26 PM
Tania, thanks so much for sponsoring and for my win! Janice
Edmonds  Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 9:21 AM
Hilarious Janice, a great Limerick twosome… Beryl
Canerdy Avatar
May 8, 2024 at 7:15 PM
Thanks a million, Beryl. Janice
May Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 2:49 PM
Lol, a bait and switch, Nicely done Janice
Canerdy Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 10:07 PM
Thanks so much, Joseph. Janice
Rodgers Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 8:56 AM
Dear Janice, The dynamic between the wife's desire for affection and the husband's request for food creates a humorous, relatable, and amusing tension. I loved your clever use of rhyme and wit, which adds to the poem's charm, drawing the reader into the playful exchange between the characters. Your poem embraces spontaneity and humor in our relationships, even in unexpected moments. Brilliant! - Blessings, Daniel
Canerdy Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 1:32 PM
WOW!! Thanks so much, Daniel. You're like a professional reviewer! Janice
Cunningham Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 12:21 AM
Lol, hilarious Janice, best of luck in the contest. Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Canerdy Avatar
May 7, 2024 at 1:32 PM
Thanks so much, Tom. Good to hear from you. Janice
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