Hungry Clouds

Clouds
Cumulous, dense, fluffy, gorgeous
Clouds
Profuse, passionate, powerful, 
Poetic black and white
Intensely desirous like the light for the cave
Or the river from the mountain on the valley
Though black, gray and white near the shore
Deep inside the core
Ripe crimson lore of tomato like hunger
Waiting and counting down the minutes
And the counting hastens
Too impatient to hold water
Very seldom we can do
We all love the dew
In a diversity of hue
But still biding its time as I saw them
The clouds
Dense, dark and delighted
Biding its time
For the sun to go out
Enabling the concentrated vapors to darken
For the thunderous collapse
In a purple plunge down
On the starving earth
Inside its curious caves and crescents
In tempest and tornadoes 
Beautifully blooming blows
All windows open
The brimming dam broken
Buddha smiles
At the existential styles
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23/02/2017 Word count – 148 as checked at howmanysyllables.com
For the contest: Any Free Verse 150 words or less: Sponsored by:
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Date: 3/12/2017 7:18:00 AM
purple plunge down on the starving earth. what a beautiful organism mutually feeding the various parts. excellent images Sir...Doug
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Probir Gupta
Date: 3/12/2017 7:29:00 AM
Thank you, Doug ...
Date: 2/25/2017 9:18:00 AM
I found this entry to be vivid and expressive with imagery beginning with the title itself. Good luck with the contest. Well done
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Date: 2/26/2017 5:28:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 2/24/2017 11:11:00 AM
In the clouds is where imagination lies. Love the write, Probir:)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/24/2017 11:26:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel ...
Date: 2/24/2017 6:05:00 AM
A wonderful free verse poem that fills the mind with so many wonderful visions. Much luck in the contest
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/24/2017 7:57:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 2/23/2017 11:10:00 PM
Simply stunning! I can imagine Buddha smiling too! Good luck for the contest mate!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 2/24/2017 4:28:00 AM
Thank you for sharing the essence of the poem ...
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