Hungry Clouds

Clouds
Cumulous, dense, fluffy, gorgeous
Clouds
Profuse, passionate, powerful, 
Poetic black and white
Intensely desirous like the light for the cave
Or the river from the mountain on the valley
Though black, gray and white near the shore
Deep inside the core
Ripe crimson lore of tomato like hunger
Waiting and counting down the minutes
And the counting hastens
Too impatient to hold water
Very seldom we can do
We all love the dew
In a diversity of hue
But still biding its time as I saw them
The clouds
Dense, dark and delighted
Biding its time
For the sun to go out
Enabling the concentrated vapors to darken
For the thunderous collapse
In a purple plunge down
On the starving earth
Inside its curious caves and crescents
In tempest and tornadoes 
Beautifully blooming blows
All windows open
The brimming dam broken
Buddha smiles
At the existential styles
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23/02/2017 Word count – 148 as checked at howmanysyllables.com
For the contest: Any Free Verse 150 words or less: Sponsored by:
Laura Loo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Blair Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 7:18 AM
purple plunge down on the starving earth. what a beautiful organism mutually feeding the various parts. excellent images Sir...Doug
Gupta Avatar
March 12, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Thank you, Doug ...
Ricci Avatar
February 25, 2017 at 9:18 AM
I found this entry to be vivid and expressive with imagery beginning with the title itself. Good luck with the contest. Well done
Gupta Avatar
February 26, 2017 at 5:28 AM
Thank you ...
Turner Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 11:11 AM
In the clouds is where imagination lies. Love the write, Probir:)
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February 24, 2017 at 11:26 AM
Thank you, Daniel ...
Green Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 6:05 AM
A wonderful free verse poem that fills the mind with so many wonderful visions. Much luck in the contest
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February 24, 2017 at 7:57 AM
Thank you ...
Wolf Avatar
February 23, 2017 at 11:10 PM
Simply stunning! I can imagine Buddha smiling too! Good luck for the contest mate!
Gupta Avatar
February 24, 2017 at 4:28 AM
Thank you for sharing the essence of the poem ...
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