Hunger Moon

Nauseous yellow,

deliberate,
and rising above

dying limbs.

Hungry, and full

it looms over,

watching the wicked

grow wings.

Some say the Moon

was once a piece of the Earth,

that during the fetal stages of

the solar nebula, it simply

span off, like a drunk dancing

in circles, his beer flung

from dizzy hands.

Others say that the Moon

 followed the Earth home,

and was kept in the might

of gravity.

And yet, the theory I like 

best is: Two angry, molten

planetesimals collided right

in our front yard and fought

for the Iron heart that 

eventually got pulled inside

our world; explaining the 

difference in composition

between the hungry,

and the greedy.

The wicked,

and the solemn

looking down at us,
waiting for another fight.

-James Kelley 2014, All rights reserved.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/1/2014 2:36:00 PM
Very good write James. An original way to tackle this ever popular subject...the moon. I have to read more of your poems...paul
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Date: 3/1/2014 5:24:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Paul, feel free. Nice to meet you.
Date: 2/17/2014 5:12:00 PM
I've always wondered what killed the moon and now you tell me its only playing possum waiting for another fight. I will view the moon as a drunk dancing in circles tonight. An interesting, fun, and thought inducing read.
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Date: 2/17/2014 6:00:00 PM
haha, thanks John...glad you enjoyed it
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