Humpty Dumpty House

Humpty Dumpty House

A home.
The one he promised you.
That white picket fence,
light flooded rooms.
A swing on a tree in the front yard.

He promised,
I'm sure he did.
He promised,
to fill it with laughter.
It was where you were both supposed to dream.
The gathering place of love,
of family,
of friends.
Sadly,
it was a place of pretend. 
For you a dark fairy tale.
Wrapped in a pretty shell,
it’s perfect beautiful lines
Curved away from you.

Then the cracks appeared,
spreading at the speed of his lies.
You so desperately wanted to trust those eyes.
You thought he was different from other guys.
Him presenting his perfect disguise.

No amount of renovations
Could repair the cracks.
The essence of you under attack.
A beautiful dream painted black.
You couldn’t, 
you wouldn't 
Put it back together again
Your house was no home,
it was a place of pain

Helplessly you watched it crumble.
Forced to walk away from it all.
The cracks too many it had to fall
You had your answers.
You needed to hold your head tall.
You seen a future beyond eggshell walls.

You deserved better,
Your own happily ever after.
The dreams you held matter.
Tears can turn to laughter.

For you
Fairy tales were not enough
You deserved  a foundation made of better stuff.
Beyond your broken,
you found your dream.
Thankfully,
wonderfully,
amazingly,
God answered 
Both of our prayers. 
He gifted us harmony.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 3/14/2014 11:15:00 AM
Absolutely loved the ending! Interesting write leading to it. Kept me spell bound.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2014 11:57:00 AM
Thanks Carol. Hugs Rick
Date: 3/14/2014 7:45:00 AM
As usual my friend, you amaze me. "Beyond your broken, you will find your dream" I need to cross stitch that to hang on my wall.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2014 8:35:00 AM
Wow a woman of many talents. You also do cross stitching. I am pleased my tale resonates with you.
Date: 3/13/2014 8:22:00 PM
Great title Rick and poem. Sadly so many never get this second chance at true love and happiness, I'm so glad it fell right for you. Take care, Richard
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/14/2014 8:36:00 AM
I am thankful to be one of the lucky ones. You take care as well Rich.
Date: 3/12/2014 11:40:00 AM
A very good poem again Richard, You keep amazing me with your wonderful poems........Your friend.....Roger
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2014 12:00:00 PM
You are Kind Roger, thanks.
Date: 3/12/2014 11:16:00 AM
WOW!!! Great write my good West Coast Man! Just as an aside... 3-6 inches of snow today!!! Grrrrrrrrr! Is there NO END!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2014 11:18:00 AM
We have had spring like weather for the last week. All you have to do us head West Jack. Thanks for the visit and kind comment.
Date: 3/12/2014 6:47:00 AM
Richard, I read this story, finding inspiration in human resiliency, have similar instances in my family.....good work! jimbo
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/12/2014 9:42:00 AM
Thanks so much Jimbo, I appreciate the visit.
Date: 3/11/2014 9:27:00 PM
wow, Richard this is an amazingly good poem. is it true? Was this about your wife or did you just take poetic liberty? I love it.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/11/2014 10:47:00 PM
True story. Thanks Amdrea .
Date: 3/11/2014 6:33:00 PM
brilliant pen Rick one of your best kudos hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/11/2014 6:59:00 PM
Thanks Shadow.
Date: 3/11/2014 3:08:00 PM
Love this with a beautiful ending - congrats on your wins too, my friend
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/11/2014 3:57:00 PM
Thanks Jack.
Date: 3/10/2014 10:45:00 PM
This went WAY beyond what I was expecting. Building/rebuilding what matters at the end of the day. Togetherness.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/11/2014 12:10:00 AM
Glad you liked it Drake.
Date: 3/10/2014 4:30:00 PM
This gave me goose bumps with the wonderful fairytale ending becoming true happiness after living a nightmare.Excellent indeed!!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/10/2014 5:17:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine, she has certainly become my happy.
Date: 3/10/2014 1:34:00 PM
Wow Richard this is fantastic..So true in every sense..It is a favorite...Tim
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/10/2014 5:18:00 PM
Thanks so much Tim, you are such an encouraging guy.
Date: 3/10/2014 12:26:00 PM
Richard...how do you do it? Put yourself in someone's life...so well...to see it all through your eyes...EVEN behind those shades! :) This was SOOO SOOOO moving...and powerful. WOW! By the way...change to...to too...hee hee. ..The cracks TOO many..it has to fall. HAPPY endings...Only in dreams. Lovely
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/10/2014 5:21:00 PM
Thanks, I guess I shouldn't be so stingy with my Os. I have been thinking of this one for a few days. I'm pleased you like it.
Date: 3/10/2014 10:23:00 AM
this is a most charming, refreshing read...bring on the magic of imagination, rich!.. huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 3/10/2014 10:34:00 AM
Thanks and a big hug back to you.
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