Humourless Puma

One day I met a big black puma
whom definitely lost its humour
I showed it silly tricks
the puma licked its lips
became an unwanted consumer.

Composed 8/24/2017.
Animal nonsense contest.
Sponsored by Kevin Shaw.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roberts Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 2:10 PM
Maybe stick to helping the lion withdraw the nasty prick from his huge paw! Congratulations
Pett Avatar
September 1, 2017 at 5:15 PM
Thanks Donna, I think that's a good piece of advice, pumas are not very grateful. :))
Andresen Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 2:11 AM
- A scary animal to meet ... although it was happy :) - Congratulations, Roy - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Pett Avatar
August 30, 2017 at 2:48 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise for your very kind comment and support, much appreciated. :))
Stebbings Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 2:09 PM
Nice one, Roy, a humourless puma. Congratulations on your win. // Barry
Pett Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 3:34 PM
Thank you very much Barry your support is much appreciated. :))
Barden Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 7:28 PM
Love it, Roy, very imaginative - congrats! :-)
Pett Avatar
August 29, 2017 at 2:56 AM
Thank you very much Greg, your comment is really appreciated. :))
Dietrich Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:22 PM
NICELY done!! Congrats, Roy.
Pett Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:35 PM
Thank you so much Andrea, much appreciated. :))
Wood Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 3:27 PM
hehe, unwanted consumer! Great rhymes Roy!
Pett Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:03 PM
Thank you very much Dean for your very kind comment and support. :))
Canerdy Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 3:21 PM
Congrats on your win, Roy! Janice
Pett Avatar
August 28, 2017 at 5:02 PM
Thank you so much Janice you are very kind. :))
Harris Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 8:59 AM
Hoping you are still around, even though you have been eaten!
Pett Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 12:11 PM
I'm still here apparently he turned out to be a fussy cheetah lol, thanks for your support much appreciated. :))
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