Jan Allison Poet Rhyme

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Writing Challenge H Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France

07/02/23

Humor

Lil’s lost over two hundred and eighty pounds
Of ugly, useless and unwanted fat
Her best friend said “Lil you should be proud
You’ve finally divorced the bone idle pratt”

Some folk may find this poem funny
I guess humor is pretty subjective
But if it raises a chuckle or smile
I’ve achieved my goal and objective!

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Constance La France July 21, 2023 at 1:53 PM Jan, a delightful poem that brings a smile and and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge H Words !

Paula Goldsmith July 4, 2023 at 10:27 AM Congratulations on your win. A fun/cute write/picture. Thanks for the smile. You did achieve your goal/objective. Hooray... Have a blessed/great day................. Jan Allison July 4, 2023 at 2:04 PM thanks Paula xx

Sotto Poet July 4, 2023 at 7:08 AM Oh Jan, how I adore your delightful sense of humor, which regrettably seems to be in short supply in our current world. Allow me to extend my heartfelt congratulations on your well-deserved win in the contest. Jan Allison July 4, 2023 at 2:04 PM Thanks Sotto, if I make someone smile then its all worthwhile, I just write and try and amuse people if I can with my silly poems:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen July 4, 2023 at 5:49 AM - Fun today too ... congratulations with a smile, Jan :) - hugs Jan Allison July 4, 2023 at 2:03 PM thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Beryl Edmonds July 3, 2023 at 9:09 PM Having such a hefty weight off her mind leaves Lil free to find someone who’s kind. Great Jan, you provide a laugh a Limerick every time… Jan Allison July 3, 2023 at 11:32 PM love that rhyming comment Belle xx hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich July 3, 2023 at 4:51 PM yes, that is a good joke, Jan. Love ya! Jan Allison July 3, 2023 at 11:32 PM thanks Andrea Happy Tuesday - just off to a funeral but not someone we know, hubby is putting a PA system in the church hall as its expected the congregation will fill the church. hugs jan xx

Lin Lane July 3, 2023 at 8:48 AM Jan, you need to post a limerick of the day to put everyone in a good mood. Jan Allison July 3, 2023 at 9:12 AM lol Lin, I am busy atm will post something later after dancing xx

Kim Rodrigues July 3, 2023 at 7:52 AM Made me smile! Why not! Jan Allison July 3, 2023 at 9:10 AM thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer July 2, 2023 at 4:58 PM Made me laugh, Jan! I should’ve seen it coming, but didn’t. That’s to your credit! Jan Allison July 3, 2023 at 9:10 AM Thanks Ilene its based on an old joke - so glad you appreciated the humour:-) hugs jan xx

John Read July 2, 2023 at 10:23 AM Love your sense of humor Jan, sadly now lacking in this world of ours. Jan Allison July 2, 2023 at 11:26 AM Thanks John, my style may not be to everything's taste but I do try and raise a smile when i can. thanks so much fro dropping by:-) hugs Jan xx

Tania Kitchin July 2, 2023 at 8:29 AM Jan, a cute one, made me laugh, you are the queen of limericks too! Hugs Jan Allison July 2, 2023 at 8:43 AM Aww thanks Tania, i wear my queen of poop crown with great pride and love writing limericks and silly poems:-) hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen July 2, 2023 at 7:08 AM - Not everyone has a sense of humor, Jan ... and people have different humor ... I actually think humor is as important as medicine ... thanks for today's pill :) - hugs Jan Allison July 2, 2023 at 7:12 AM I agree Anne-Lise and I have never posted one of my poems under the 'hilarious' category as humour is subjective xx hugs jan xx