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Hummingbirds

From the wrought iron gables the oblong hummingbird feeder dangles shiny plastic, strawberry lip-gloss red. It sways above my grandmother’s head as she watches their vibrating wings. She rests at the kitchen sink, puts down her dishtowel, and smiles. I want to ask if she is tired of housewifely trials, but the cat leaps to the window, hissing, waking my grandmother from her reminiscing. She goes back to the dirty dishes, alone; silence is the new partner in her half-empty home.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/11/2010 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Robin. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 6:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Robin. Wishing you the best always on your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/9/2010 3:56:00 AM
Congrats Robbin on having your poem being featured on the Poetry Soup home page this week. Please keep your creative caps on, let your poetry pen keep painting your poetry pads with colors of creativity. Thanks for sharing this with us and have a wonderful week ahead. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 6/11/2010 5:56:00 PM
Sad write
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