Hummingbird On Flower

Hummingbird flutters Swiftly Kisses Laitris Stirs the air moves on

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Ismael Nieves

Date: 9/25/2009 12:58:00 PM

I love it!

Shirin Neshat

Date: 7/27/2009 3:06:00 AM

cute poem.

James Fraser

Date: 7/19/2009 3:11:00 PM

Sara, you have written a little gem here, just like the Hummingbird>>James

Barbara Johnson

Date: 7/19/2009 2:03:00 PM

Great Haiku, I have always loved those little precious birds. We have one little hummer that comes everyday that I love to watch, those tiny wings going a million miles a minute, so it seems like... God Bless

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 7/19/2009 11:47:00 AM

I love hummingbirds and I love this poem...thank you for your comments on my monoku also... ~Trudy~

Sandra Hudson

Date: 7/19/2009 11:34:00 AM

Great and beautiful Haiku, I always picture the episode on wild kingdom, where the hummingbird was captured in slow motion for the first time. It was a 10 second piece of filmography that will always play and rewind to play forever. Yes you were correct in your assessment of muse waxing. I am my worst critic. Thanks for your welcome comments-AA

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/19/2009 6:44:00 AM

what a beautiful scene dear friend--charma