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Hummingbird

invisible wings keep time with a beating heart frantically pacing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/26/2012 2:28:00 AM
A great hailu, indeed. As a writer of such genres, I'll read it again and again!
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Date: 7/2/2012 4:08:00 PM
2000/4 time.
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Date: 6/29/2012 10:17:00 AM
Excellent!!
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Date: 6/22/2012 9:48:00 PM
VERY good one. Probably the best I have seen so far!
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Date: 6/22/2012 7:08:00 AM
you nailed it Tanya Kathy
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Date: 6/21/2012 5:52:00 PM
Only Seals and Crofts could describe a hummingbird better than you. Good work.
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Date: 6/21/2012 4:15:00 PM
You paint the scene beautifully! This one could also be a Haiku! I love your poem! Great Work!!
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Date: 6/21/2012 4:00:00 PM
very lovely! well chosen words...
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