Humble Pie

He prepared the pie
With greatest care
Within the pot 
My brains and hair
For hers had been
A lofty perch 
Just a peg or two
Would never do

Cremated remains
Formed the shell
Into the plate
My crushed bones fell
I could still see
But could not yell
The pie's aroma
A story to tell

My innards baked
Hour by hour
The smell of blood
And blackened flour
Words poured in
Enhanced the flavour
The humble pie 
For her to savour

Fork to mouth
My body consumed 
From the plate
My heart exhumed
The baker says 
She's eating crow
The taste is bitter
She eats the pie slow

The true recipe
He does not show
Humble pies plentiful
Stacked row on row
The victims many
Some you may know
If he invites you
I beg you not to go!


For Sheri's Plentitude of Pie Contest, 

I went with a halloween twist.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 12/10/2014 9:03:00 AM
Thanks to all, I would like to respond individually but time is short.
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Date: 12/9/2014 9:14:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations Richard.
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Date: 12/9/2014 8:52:00 AM
Love the title, congrats on the win
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Date: 12/8/2014 3:37:00 PM
Love the twist on this one - brilliant, clever write! Please accept my hearty congratulations on your fine win, Richard! Best wishes, Pandita.
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Date: 12/8/2014 2:37:00 PM
Back with deserved congrats, Richard. I told you it would do better than mine...and it sure did:) // paul
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Date: 12/8/2014 2:24:00 PM
Dinner at Hannibal's... Loved the theme and the poem! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/8/2014 11:39:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/8/2014 10:51:00 AM
Richard, I love the Halloween twist to your pie mix. Thanks for entering the pie contest, truly wonderful submissions sent in, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/9/2014 8:00:00 AM
Well let's hope I never have to eat humble pie, although I did love that band in the 70's. Good morning Rick, have missed reading your poetry.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/9/2014 11:36:00 AM
Well, I am off to see what you have come up with. Thanks for making my morning pleasurable. I enjoy your company.
Date: 10/26/2014 4:37:00 AM
This is a very creative take on the challenge. As always a masterful write.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/26/2014 8:13:00 AM
Thanks Maurice.
Date: 10/25/2014 8:52:00 AM
I love it Rick! You took this write in a great direction, I really enjoyed reading this wondrous poem this morning! Thank you for referring me to this illustrious poem! What a perfect Halloween twist you have written here! Great Work!!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/25/2014 9:19:00 AM
Thanks Russel, I am pleased you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/22/2014 8:41:00 AM
How humble the baker is! at least for his umbles. love....rajat
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/22/2014 9:06:00 AM
Thanks Rajat.
Date: 10/19/2014 7:06:00 AM
Yours is a unique take on the pie theme, Richard....a poem that should stand out among the others, mine included! I think I'll miss out on pie next time round:) // paul
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/19/2014 7:44:00 AM
Ha ha, I don't blame you, also I doubt you would qualify for an invitation to eat humble pie.
Date: 10/18/2014 6:25:00 PM
I love this morbid brlliance, deathly and grainy in lesson of humility Richard. Havent we all felt like this at some point, not vicims, but casualities of arrogance served on Karma's warm plate. "Blackened flour" really holds the meaning for me, just stupendous Richard, a FAV! Justin
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2014 6:47:00 PM
I like how you have interpreted my piece, you are on the mark my friend.
Date: 10/18/2014 4:51:00 AM
Hi Richard Quite a poem of contrasting themes and ideals. I found myself between .. the .. "ew... disgusting" .. to " that is so true". Great write as always Xx~Xx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2014 7:05:00 AM
Good morning Kim. Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 10/17/2014 12:49:00 PM
Now this is certainly different. Thank goodness it's chicken for supper, and not pie. Good luck in the contest Richard. You never know 'the pies the limits for you' - James :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/18/2014 7:07:00 AM
Ha ha, good choice my friend.
Date: 10/17/2014 4:56:00 AM
now thats what i call a pie richard excellent pen dear friend smiling
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/17/2014 7:02:00 AM
It may not be what the Judge is looking for but I wanted to take the theme in a compleatly different direction. I'm glad I can add a smile to your day. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 10/17/2014 12:43:00 AM
... you didn't just watch Sweeney Todd did you? It reminds me of that except there's no barber. What I thought was creepy about this write was the fact that you described it as if you were still alive... while being eaten. Best of luck on the contest!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/17/2014 7:06:00 AM
Good morning Timothy, no I haven't been watching Sweeny Tod *lol* if I can draw on any influence, perhaps Stephen King although I rarely write in this genre. This one kind of wrote it self. Thanks for the luck Timothy.
Date: 10/16/2014 9:59:00 PM
this one is VERY creepy, Richard, which is a GOOD thing for being unique in the contest and also for Halloween theme. it reminds me of Sweeny Todd. GREAT stuff.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/17/2014 7:08:00 AM
Interesting that I have two Sweeny Todd references, thanks for the encouraging visit.
Date: 10/16/2014 9:57:00 PM
I agree with what you said on my Time Heals All. I think I will go to it and take off the word "all" now let me see this one here!!!
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Date: 10/16/2014 8:44:00 PM
Humble pie, I have eaten lots in my time on this spinning blue marble my friend. Your write excels in that dish... A superb write and good luck in that contest. A 7..
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2014 8:58:00 PM
Thanks, for the kind comment, have another peek I am now finished writing it.
Date: 10/16/2014 7:49:00 PM
I love how you brought Halloween into this Richard but I am feeling a little queasy.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2014 8:59:00 PM
Thanks Brenda, it is now finished. It may make you a bit more queasy.
Date: 10/16/2014 7:00:00 PM
That is good! I like the take on the theme. and the spirit of halloween you put along with it, best of luck to you in the contest sweetie.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2014 9:02:00 PM
Hi Casarah, it is now complete. Also have a look at my bio poem and tell me if I have gone to far.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2014 7:06:00 PM
I am doing a rewrite, I wanted to get it into the contest before it closed. Check back in a few hours.
Date: 10/16/2014 6:10:00 PM
ooh deep and dark Richard not a pie I fancy eating:-) good luck with the contest:-) hugs jan xxx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/17/2014 2:29:00 AM
Its exceptional Richard i feel chilled reading it - could do with a nice slice of pie to warm me up now! hugs jan xxx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2014 8:57:00 PM
Check my final offering.
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/16/2014 6:32:00 PM
You sure did - its a great take on the theme:-) hugs jan xxx
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 10/16/2014 6:30:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I wanted to take a different approach.
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