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Humans need an after life

(unfit category but no choice.) Life would be worthless and short If this is the only dear life we have Great plans just death can abort to be useless once you met your grave. And for those who die young, in chilhood's tender ages How short and incomplete life would be How unfair and unlucky if death's the end for them Besides life to the fullest is eternity. What about those who born and die poor or those born deaf, blind or lame What if they were so doomed without any cure How unlucky if resurrection never came! But a belief that there's a life after this could be of great consolation and solace especially to the poor handicapped, the shortlived that they could make it up under heaven's grace! For the good one who is born blind In heaven shall he in brighter vision see And the goodly one yet who has lost his mind will in the afterlife be as sane as could be The deaf man with his balance of pious acts Only the hereafter would compensate what he lacks And that godly one born poor and who dies poor could be of the richest at heaven's door In this life those who've been saintly yet unable to talk could cheer up to believe what heaven has in stock For this world can be misery, heaven's the place to rock In this world at times you've to let the hawks gawk Knowing your tormentor in heaven shall ye mock Thus for a true happy ever after for an abode of mirth and laughter Work towards thy hereafter A divine place devoid of disaster!

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Date: 6/10/2014 4:20:00 PM
I absolutely adore this poem... Think it made me a fan... Will have to read more of your writings soon!... Arlene...
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Date: 12/26/2013 4:41:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this lovely poem. warm thoughts , ralph
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Date: 11/28/2013 8:08:00 PM
oh my! wow.. love the win...........SKAT
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Date: 11/27/2013 2:48:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/27/2013 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/26/2013 6:32:00 PM
congrats on your win :)
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Date: 11/26/2013 5:42:00 PM
S. Z K. , Congratulations... Enjoyed your inspired write from the Phil Collins theme “Another day in Paradise." take care.... LINDA
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Date: 11/26/2013 5:19:00 PM
Amazing ! Congratulations well deserved , not only a 1st place , a scholar or Visionary. When I was at my very dark moment , questioning why ? I opened the bible and there it was John 15 , verse 18 , you speak of "the World s Hatred " 'If the World Hates you , It hated me 1st " Jesus Christ ."
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Date: 11/26/2013 7:03:00 AM
congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/26/2013 4:06:00 AM
Congratulations on the first place win, Zaynub
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Date: 11/26/2013 2:54:00 AM
Congratulations. Thank you for the support extended.Always yours (: ) Jenish Soosai Anthony.
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 11/27/2013 11:37:00 AM
Thanx sooo much poet Undertaker!
Date: 10/13/2013 4:35:00 AM
A very interesting thought. I like this poem
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Date: 8/29/2013 10:27:00 PM
love the way you constructed this. I've always had the thought of those handicapped souls are really angels who have come down to teach us compassion ;}
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Date: 8/17/2013 11:47:00 PM
ZAINAB ,WELL WRIITEN AITH PROFOUND OPTIMISTIC IDEAS, but try to add rhythem while addition of consonents ,have you ever heard the saying of Legend The Robert Frost, about free verse poetry is like playing tennis without net.I am not gonna critic you, but giving you positve aspect of thoughts.keep up.
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Date: 8/7/2013 4:10:00 AM
Yes knowing that we have a second chance, is a lovely thought to ponder on...I really enjoyed reading this poem thank you,,,, s zaynub
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Date: 7/4/2013 9:43:00 AM
I found this a very thoughtful poem, full of hope. Some nice rhyming to. Well done
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Date: 6/26/2013 10:27:00 PM
yes we do need an after life.. somewhere reassuring... enjoyed... LINDA
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Date: 6/25/2013 3:20:00 PM
This is great, so my hopeful messages, i have a poem along these line with a different twist called Whats Normal, might interest you, blessings, Carl
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Date: 6/24/2013 4:33:00 PM
Hope - filled cosmic work here! I hope you are right! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 6/19/2013 2:46:00 PM
Lovely thoughts, especially for the handicapped and those who die too young. I really cannot imagine a world that has no thought of an afterlife!
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Date: 6/19/2013 7:35:00 AM
Wonderfully wise and apt words. Thanks for sharing. Thank you for reading and commenting. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/19/2013 7:09:00 AM
Faith is a great thing for people who has it. Even though I have no religious faith, I appreciate this song in short rhymes where simple emotions are depicted in emotional way
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Date: 6/19/2013 7:08:00 AM
Faith is a thing for people who has it. Even though I have no religious faith, I appreciate this song in short rhymes where simple emotions are depicted in emotional way
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Date: 6/18/2013 9:09:00 AM
I would comment that all my poems that of which God has inspired and guided me to write This is a make of them all I really was touched with this one and thank you for the shear God bless Your brother in Christ
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