Humanity Without Boundaries

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Written: December 13, 2023 ______________________________________ An ovation for peace vibrates everywhere around the globe bringing everyone together unified in opposing mayhem at outbreak of violent conflict wrenching love in a veil of bitterness. If rhetoric could alleviate anguish soothe tremendous pain bridges that span a wider range jointly building a fresh world a borderless, unfettered mankind. fulfilling lofty dreams of earth, blossoming fields of roses throughout a lifetime conquering a season of sorrow people's stupidity exploring a tranquil path beyond lines that divide us apart.

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Silent One

Date: 12/14/2023 12:50:00 PM

Loving your opening stanza my dear friend.. An ovation for peace vibrates everywhere around the globe bringing everyone together unified in opposing mayhem at outbreak of violent conflict wrenching love in a veil of bitterness... Profound and true words that everyone should follow but you are right some are stupid for too long.... great poem..

Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/14/2023 10:47:00 AM

Indeed, we can be "stupid," Lasaad, trampling through rose gardens, gathering thorns instead of spreading fragrant petals of peace to "fulfill lofty dreams" and conquer "a season of sorrow." I adore your title "Humanity without Boundaries.! That alone, while it beautifully sets up your poem, is genius! Your chosen words create an atmosphere where the longing for peace lives and vibrates to me. There is depth in the simplicity of each line. Thank you for this lovely prayer. Blessings!

Ink Empress

Date: 12/14/2023 6:52:00 AM

This is so profound as always dr sotto, so much conveyed in such a poetic manner . I resonated with so many lines and your way with phrasing thoughts left me in awe impressed! Beyond impeccable especially love “ wrenching love in a veil of bitterness.” What a creative line! “ fulfilling lofty dreams of earth, blossoming fields of roses“ love that so much! One can only wish and hope for a world that advocates peace together in unison. I hope this poem reaches many and will inspire many…

Valsa George

Date: 12/13/2023 10:23:00 PM

Only by "exploring a tranquil path beyond lines that divide us apart" and by "jointly building a fresh world a borderless, unfettered mankind" we can hope for peace. As long as divisions exist, there can be only mayhem and conflict. This poem highlighting the need for a united world of love and brotherhood is greatly appreciated. You are always a champion of brotherhood.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 12/13/2023 10:10:00 PM

Very true, dear Sotto, if only everyone can rise above the differences and conflicts and unify the ideologies with a basic concept of peace.. Then this world would become a paradise to live in instead of horror prevailing everywhere. Your word play is absolutely phenomenal and the meaningful depth here is just profound.. I absolutely loved reading this "An ovation for peace vibrates..around the globe", "If rhetoric could alleviate anguish soothe tremendous pain" Only love & peace can bring magic

Deb M

Date: 12/13/2023 3:52:00 PM

Lasaad ….this wonderful perfectly written poem is so inspirational! Wouldn't peace and tranquility in our world be amazing! An encouraging write my friend…..Debx

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/13/2023 3:14:00 PM

I love the hope and optimism in in your words, dear Sotto. I agree with the sentiment...I believe people globally want peace. I have friends who live in Germany and France...their fears, hopes, etc., are the same as ours. They don't believe the notion of peace is a lofty dream; they believe its entirely plausible in only we'd do as you suggest--explore a tranquil path beyond lines that divide. That's peaceful coexistence and tolerance. Was quite taken with this poem. your poetess friend, Sara