Human Traffic

Unharnessed footfalls meld with bike ricksaws
as antiquated oil belching buses roar.
Limo drivers bull their way door to door 
to the sound of dangling baskets of macaws. 
Hawkers shriek their wares without pause, 
such is the Katmandu that I adore.
Unharnessed footfalls meld. 
Men in open stalls serve tea from drawers 
Sari wearing women behind veils rapport. 
Orphaned children beg on from store to store,
the dross of life from which our eyes withdraw. 
Unharnessed footfalls meld. 

Contest: Rodine the Traffic of Life
Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Date: 7/21/12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Iloduba Jnr Avatar
September 2, 2012 at 1:41 PM
orphaned children beg on from store to store,.....no one slays my heart like u do wt ur lines.bn a long time now debbie.kk`s back on d block. ds is a strong one. one love Debbie.
A   Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 11:59 PM
Debbie, another wonderful win... congratulations... good night...pd
M V Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 11:37 PM
Nicely penned on human traffic,Debbie.Congratulations!Also thanks for being congratulated me on my win in the soup contest.With love,Fabiyas
Brown Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 7:50 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "The Traffic Of Life" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 7:49 PM
Congrats on your win Debi!!Very nice!
Dietrich Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 5:15 PM
wow, it's the Silver of the Olympics for me in this contest!!! Maybe the gold. Congrats!
Williams Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 3:21 PM
Debbie, congrats on your win...liked this first time..David
Kendrick Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 3:09 PM
((()))Congrats on your winning work..Sara
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 11:12 AM
Congrats on your awesome win, Debbie! So descriptive I feel like I'm on that street in Katmandu...love and blessings
Sweetheart Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 9:52 AM
congrats Debbie on a poignant write and wonderful win luv.. for Nette.. glad u enjoyed my HEAT entry.. I had fun writing it too..
Onclaud Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 8:53 AM
you have a special way of defining human condition, deb.. congrats on your fine win in my contest with huggs ..:)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 7:43 AM
Congratulations on your win Debbie xx
Williams Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 11:39 AM
Debbie I love this, a good insight to life in Kathmandu...David
Grisetti Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 11:13 AM
Thank you for taking us to this place with your vivid images of sight and sound and smell.
Horsman Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 10:49 AM
You poem show here, your true wonderful self, Debbie, thanks for your suggestion on Flash of youth, where! was my preference, but were was grammatically correct, again thanks. harry
M V Avatar
July 23, 2012 at 10:43 AM
It is real and original scene,Debbie.Your typical perfection is seen in every line.Thank you very much for congrats on my poem being entered in to the final round of poetry soup international contest.With a lot of love, Fabiyas
Emmanuel Brown Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 2:59 PM
Debbine, this is great one. I wish you all the best in your contest. However, the victims of human trafficking are driven into it by unfairness of their fatherland. It will stop when love of God is in place again.
Guzzi Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 3:42 PM
the title is a pun ;)
Emmanuel Brown Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 3:00 PM
Sweetheart Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 6:57 AM
this is a magnificent write Debbie.. Nette will be amazed as I am for the depth and focus of this piece .. best wishes.. thankxx for my win also.. my hands are swollen with arthritis this week and painful and uncomfortable..trying to get back on track with hand exercises now.. enjoyed your contest luv..
Campi Avatar
July 22, 2012 at 5:06 AM
This poem is so well written. It is indeed a traffic of life. Good luck in the contest, Jancarl
O'Leary Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 3:36 PM
Great description- finely detailed... good luck in the contest... Terry
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