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'human Nature'

bask in the moisture
star illuminated sky
two mold into one
splendid reverberation 
nature combined with our love








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Andrea Dietrich

July 19, 2011 at 6:51 PM

Congratulations in the contest, Wilma. Glad to see this one again!

Elaine George

July 18, 2011 at 11:28 AM

Beautiful Tanka, Wilma. Many congrats on your HM. Lainie

Elaine George

July 18, 2011 at 11:25 AM

Beautiful Tanka, Wilma. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 18, 2011 at 10:16 AM

Congratulations on your win Wilma in the contest of Francine M. Roberts "Tanka You". Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 17, 2011 at 5:50 PM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of Francine, Wilma

Lee Ramage

July 17, 2011 at 3:40 PM

Nice poem. Lee

Sara Kendrick

July 17, 2011 at 1:05 PM

Congrats on your win..Sara

Nette Onclaud

July 17, 2011 at 7:04 AM

dig this, wilms..well deserving of the award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 16, 2011 at 9:50 PM

Congrats Wilma on your HM in Summer Nights with this splendid entry my friend..luv it..

Francine Roberts

July 16, 2011 at 9:21 PM

congrats on your Honorable Mention in the contest Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

July 13, 2011 at 9:30 PM

a wee bit like mine, Beach love? VERY nice.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 12, 2011 at 7:04 PM

that splendid reverberation line is priceless Wilma.. a great write and entry for Francine..good luck my friend.. another wow piece luv..

James Peranteau

July 12, 2011 at 4:13 PM

Yes, I feel natures squeeze here dear poet ! Awesome write Wilma ! Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james

Carolyn Devonshire

July 12, 2011 at 2:48 PM

Beautifuly image of two "molding into one," Wilma. If only man and nature could learn to co-exist in harmony. Lovely entry for Francine's new contest! Love, Carolyn