Human Foible Vs Godly Nature-W

Solve your karmic doings by atonement
Don’t question his methods, get benefits
HIS ways are not our ways
HE is quite mysterious
Don’t judge Him, be judged by His laws.

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Second Placement
Contest: Human Foible VS Godly nature
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 26, 2010 at 6:13 PM
Heavy stuff- Congrats my friend- I changed the last line in `The One` it is for the `is she the One` contest- should I add one more stanza inquiring if "she's the one"?
Mitchell Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 8:40 AM
Congratulations on your win.
Stella Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 7:17 AM
oops fprgot to rate it yikes heres a 7 if I already did then a 14 lol
Stella Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 7:16 AM
so well stated and congrats on your win my friend well deserved keep up 5the wonderful work here at the soup again thanks for your kind comments sweet blessings
Dietrich Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 8:35 PM
Congratulations to you, Dear Dr. Ram!
Brown Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 11:19 AM
Congratulations Dr. on your win in John Freeman's contest "Human Foible vs Godly Nature". Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 5:17 AM
Congrats, Dr Ram. Great write. You and yours have a great weekend. Rgds, Ralph
Johnson Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 11:14 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love,Joyce
Freeman Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 10:20 PM
Yes, the only way to receive the benefits associated with the higher power. Congratulations on a fine presentation. Thanks you graciously for your support. Agape, Moses
Kendrick Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 3:13 PM
Great one..Good luck in the contest in which you should be in the winner's circle..Sara
Harrison Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 7:45 PM
This is great! He is quite mysterious. I bet he laughs at us trying to figure him out. Ha! Loved your poem Dr.
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 4:19 PM
ps. hey, glad you enjoyed learning about swap quatrain. It was one of my old friends in a poetry site that invented it and a lot of poets are using it today!
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 4:18 PM
VERY good message, Dr. Ram. I like it. LUv, Andrea
Knop Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 6:14 AM
Very well write and porfound, Dr. Ram! And thank you for your kind comments...Wish you all the best...Gert
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June 22, 2010 at 10:09 PM
wow, very interesting write, enjoyed the read...P.D.
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