Hugs-2

HUGS

The day after the Tsunami hugged the shores,
by a penitent ocean lying low,
in the beach  which lay mauled and scarred,
an old woman and a girl stood homeless and hugging 
and not far away
a  bower lay  crumpled, within which
but stood tall as always  the two-some  
of a neem and a banyan in an unshakeable hug.

S.Jagathsimhan Nair, 01 Jun 13
For SKAT’s contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Guzzi Avatar
June 14, 2013 at 6:04 PM
I bet you'd want to hug everything including a tree after that! Light & Love
Gasun Avatar
June 9, 2013 at 3:11 AM
This is really amazing write my dear friend Jag! Belated big congrats on your awesome win! love and hugs, Leonora
Onclaud Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 3:16 PM
jag!... another gem from you.. creative way of treating the theme.. sweet congrats!..:) huggs
Puddifoot Avatar
June 3, 2013 at 5:12 AM
clever concept here jaggy, and I see congrats are due bc it won (I've never seen a banyan tree) x :)
Johnson Avatar
June 2, 2013 at 10:34 PM
Great hug poem. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
A   Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 8:28 PM
Jag.. Congratulations :-) on your very sweet hugging poem. always~ LINDA
De Burca Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 7:52 PM
Excellent, congrats on your win.
A  Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 1:20 PM
CONGRATULATIONS! thank you for trying out my contest. ~SKAT~
Andresen Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 10:05 AM
- A comforting hug, well done jag. - Luck in contest. - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Cee Avatar
June 1, 2013 at 6:25 AM
love this. love story behind! thanks for commenting to my poem. good luck to the contest----Elai
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