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Huffle-Winks , a Knights Story

Huffle-winks came from the forest of Jom
The King sent five knights to track them all down
For they had brought terror to the kingdom
He offered his daughter and prince’s crown.

Four of the bold knights by dragons were slain
But one lone brave knight continued the quest
Through woods, rivers and mountainous terrain
Until quest completed he would not rest.

The forest entrance surrounded by mire
Here the huffle-winks would meet their demise
That is where the brave knight built a large fire
Their enemies helped him, the dragonflies.

Huffle-winks are gone, they’ve not been seen since
The knight wed the princess and was crowned prince.








Written on 22 May 2018
For Dragons Huffle-winks, and Dragonflies contest
Sponsored by Caren Krutsinger
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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George Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 4:20 AM
Reads like a fairy tale.... dear Tom. Everything ended so well ! Happy for the brave knight who later became king.
Cunningham Avatar
April 7, 2023 at 5:46 AM
Thank you very much Valsa, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Hope you're keeping well and enjoy the coming weekend. Tom
Tripp Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Very awesome story, Tom! Loved it and the sonnet form worked well for you.
Cunningham Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 9:33 AM
Thank you Rhoda, I enjoyed doing it, and do like the sonnet form, this site has opened my eyes for sure. Tom
Pett Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 11:11 AM
Brilliant Tom, great sonnet and wonderful story, enjoyed a lot, good luck in contest. :))
Cunningham Avatar
May 27, 2018 at 1:47 PM
Thanks Roy, when I saw dragons mentioned knights in armour came to mind. Tom.
La France Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 1:25 PM
Tom, well done with the huffle winks, so creative, can't recall what my huffle winks were doing
Cunningham Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 2:09 PM
Thanks BW, haha they can be whatever you want, mine were a nasty species'. Tom.
Williams Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 7:55 AM
A wonderful story Tom, you know my love for the Medieval Times. Gripping from beginning to end....Maria hugs
Cunningham Avatar
May 26, 2018 at 12:09 PM
Thank you Lady Maria, Glad you enjoyed it. Sir Tom.
Hoffman Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 8:16 AM
A wonderful medieval tale you have spun with the Huffle-winks, Dragons and Dragonflies To;0m; Good luck in the contest!~Che
Cunningham Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 8:18 AM
Thank you Cheryl, glad that you enjoyed it. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 5:20 AM
A fine story!
Cunningham Avatar
May 24, 2018 at 5:35 AM
Thank you very much Kim. Tom
Onclaud Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 2:04 PM
such a lively piece ending on a glad note.. wonderful story-telling, tom..huggs
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 2:41 PM
Thank you very much Nette, glad you enjoyed it. Tom.
One Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 9:48 AM
Great story telling in your sonnet, you do this form very well.. always great when people use rhymes that are different that the norm, your sonnet puts mine to shame!
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 9:58 AM
Thank you very much SO, my second attempt at one, slowly branching out. Welcome back. Tom
Trifiatis Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 5:49 AM
What a delightful story, so well written and with a happy ending . Recently we had a similar story but it was not with a knight but with a young America who became a Duchess! Haha! Excellent my friend, Tom!
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Thank you Demetrios, haha love your reply. Tom
Hoffman Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 8:19 PM
A wonderful whimsical tale Tom; good luck in the contest!~Che :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 23, 2018 at 1:44 AM
Thank you very much Cheryl, glad you enjoyed it Tom.
Devonshire Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:28 PM
What a delightful, creative story told in verse, Tom! You had me grinning from ear-to-ear. You have the pen of a natural storyteller, my friend. Enjoyed very much and wish you success in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Cunningham Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Thank you very much Carolyn, I'm happy that you enjoyed it. Tom.
Andresen Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 12:42 PM
- Loves fairytale that ends happily, Tom - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 12:43 PM
Thank you very much Sunshine. Tom
Y. Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 10:55 AM
Hi Tom, You used the chosen words and created a good story. Good content and imagery. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Cunningham Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Thank you Alexis, had to tweak the syllables' a bit but got there in the end. Tom
Roper Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 10:28 AM
Great imagery and story.. luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
Cunningham Avatar
May 22, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Thank you very much Eve. Tom.
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