Hubby Having Hysterics Alliteration Contest

Parents pushing perambulators
Meeting many mothers
Coffee , cake and chat
Babies bottles to boobs
Hurry home to hubby
Hubby holding hooter
Nappy, not nice.
Baby blowing bubbles
Shower sex sleep
Luxury, lazy lie-in
Hubby having hysterics.
Siana sick over Sean
Cosy cwtch cancelled
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Williams Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 2:41 AM
Seren very good...
Roberts Avatar
March 18, 2013 at 4:27 AM
Thank you David ...Seren
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 4:09 AM
cool catchy and cosy, love it xx
Roberts Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 8:45 AM
Golly I hope they dont think I am married now.LOL ...Seren
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 11:58 PM
this is really cool, Seren. I really like this one. loved bottles to boobs
Roberts Avatar
March 15, 2013 at 12:29 AM
Tried to think what the chat would be about lol. Quite liked doing that ......Seren
Fisher Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 1:47 PM
That's a good one...Alliterations sure seem difficult to write. Good luck!
Roberts Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 4:34 PM
no not once you get started, think up the first line the rest just follows....Seren
Sivey Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 5:43 AM
This is an excellent alliteration Seren! It flowed so very well and the subject was displayed so masterfully...I caught on to it quickly and wonderfully! I enjoyed reading this delightful poem this morning! What a fun piece, Great Work!!
Roberts Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 8:18 AM
thanks Russell when I got started found it ok to do ...Seren
Hendricks Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 5:38 AM
hahaha. Hectic HouseHold. I enjoyed your alliteration. Good luck in the contest, Seren. You've got a winner here. :)
Roberts Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 8:17 AM
lol all in my imagination Delysia, think I have read too many Mills and Boons books....Seren
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