Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

Hubby

                          Hummingbirds sing sweet when
                                      his head rests on my lap-
                        Heavy-hearted moments
                                   heal my wounds with such ease-
                                He encompasses with
                                         heated passion and love-
                             Heaven in his warm arms...



Pleiades H
February 19, 2017

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Seren Roberts March 2, 2017 at 4:51 PM sounds like your heaven Laura.....Seren

Bartholomew Williams February 25, 2017 at 2:21 PM Laura, congratulations on your strong placement in this contest! This is truly a wonderful compliment to your husband. :) All my best, Bartholomew

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 24, 2017 at 10:24 PM I simply adore your Pleiades, Luloo...it reads like true love to me! Big congrats to you!! Hugs, Rhonda

Kim Rodrigues February 24, 2017 at 8:04 PM So nice! Congrats, Luloo!

Laura Leiser February 24, 2017 at 11:52 AM Such love is shown here in your poem to your husband! Congrats, Laura Loo :)

Charlie Smith February 24, 2017 at 8:27 AM Congratulations LuLoo, well done...

Joanna Daniel February 24, 2017 at 3:32 AM Wonderful tribute to your husband, Laura:) congratulations:)

Anne-Lise Andresen February 24, 2017 at 2:48 AM - Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Laura :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann February 24, 2017 at 2:36 AM Hubby as a humming bird. Great picture, Kai

Eve Roper February 23, 2017 at 11:30 PM Very good :) a 7 and congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Sushma A. Singh February 23, 2017 at 8:37 PM Sweetly penned! Congrats!!

Andrea Dietrich February 23, 2017 at 7:33 PM what a beautiful tribute to hubby. YOu chose your theme well. Congrats!

Jean Murray February 23, 2017 at 5:42 PM What a coincidence Laura. The difference is mine is in my head, yours has his arms around you.

John Hamilton February 23, 2017 at 5:39 PM Wonderful pleiades, wonderful win!

Kim Merryman February 23, 2017 at 5:21 PM A beautifully romantic Pleiades, Laura! Well written with clarity and smooth flowing lines. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim

Agnes Krampe February 23, 2017 at 5:17 PM Beautiful tribute, luloo - congrats on your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2017 at 1:54 PM - Lovely written, pleiades Laura - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison February 19, 2017 at 12:56 PM aww your Nick is a gem what a lovely tribute:-) hugs Jan xx