Hraesvelg - God of Wind

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In Norse mythology,  Hræsvelgr is a giant who takes eagle form. He sits at the end of the world (or the northern edge of the heavens) and causes the wind to blow when he beats his wings in flight. 

Hræsvelgr's name is sometimes anglicized as Hraesvelgr, Hresvelgr, Hraesveglur, or Hraesvelg. The common Danish form is Ræsvelg and the common Swedish form is Räsvelg.

This poem is about the struggle with depression...

No matter how hard I practice, I find it so hard to escape
I can look out to see where I need to go and I try and I try
My wings keep flapping, but I’m too heavy for my feathers
It’s the burden within that keeps telling me I'm not worthy
I’ve struggled too long and I’m not going to lose this fight 
Oh Hraesvelg Oh Hraesvelg I stand at this cliff’s edge
I need for you to take flight and flap your great wings
May the gusts of your wind lift me up so I can soar
If I jump and there's no wind for my wings...I will die

Edward J Ebbs - January 1, 2015


Written for a Contest, Gods of Winds
Hraesvelg, Norse mythology

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/8/2016 2:21:00 PM
Hi Edward, i like the whole concept of your poem and the way you have drafted it together. Many times i have stood on that cliff edge but i always take that one step backwards, not forwards, i have my goal now and i shall always hope to achieve it, it has taken me a long time to reach it. Hraesvelg flap thy mighty winds and keep me aloft. An excellent work Edward. Your words take us where we have to be. An excellent read. A seven my Friend....Vladislav.
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Date: 1/9/2016 10:43:00 PM
Thank You Raven :)
Date: 1/2/2015 11:44:00 PM
Ed, Congrats on your win... Linda :
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 1/3/2015 6:23:00 AM
Thanks Linda :)
Date: 1/2/2015 11:21:00 PM
Congrats on a great win Ed
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Date: 1/3/2015 6:23:00 AM
Thank You and congrats also on your win:)
Date: 1/2/2015 8:14:00 PM
I like how you are making this a plea to this particular wind god. very nice. congrats on the winners' list.
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 1/2/2015 8:19:00 PM
Thanks Kiddo :)
Date: 1/2/2015 1:06:00 PM
Many congrats and best wishes Ed xx
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 1/2/2015 1:25:00 PM
Thank you and back at you Mandy :)
Date: 1/2/2015 11:17:00 AM
beautifully descriptive many congrats:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 1/2/2015 1:24:00 PM
Aww, thanks Jan, always good to hear from you :)
Date: 1/2/2015 7:41:00 AM
Congrats on the win and wish you all the best of 2015, ed
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Date: 1/2/2015 1:23:00 PM
Thanks doc, may I wish for you a journey through this New Year with a destination leaving you with happiness and abundance of dreams fulfilled :)
Date: 1/2/2015 4:28:00 AM
Another pointer to your excellence, congrats Ed....huggs
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Edward Ebbs
Date: 1/2/2015 1:58:00 PM
I have a general amateur radio license and never changed my Novice call letter from KA7SYO...It's been so long I forgot the rules on the letters; I was just curious :)
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Date: 1/2/2015 1:42:00 PM
Sorry ,I don't understand you; if only you could be clearer...huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 1:19:00 PM
Thanks...is KAYOD5 a amateur radio call sign?
Date: 1/2/2015 2:42:00 AM
congrats on 3rd Ed ty for your support hugs
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Date: 1/2/2015 1:17:00 PM
Thanks Shadow, I'm surprise actually...I saw there was only one space left and I wrote a draft and in the morning it was too late to make a change. Thank You for all of your support in the past, it's meaningful :)
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