Howling Wind Chills Owl

howling wind chills owl... nest is moved inside tree trunks hoots are echoing

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Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/19/2011 5:37:00 PM

Congrats LNC...its freezing here( well, not really...lol) but cold for us Californians..Id move my nest inside too...BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/17/2011 3:51:00 PM

HI, Carolyn and congrats on your HM here. Trying to finally catch up on some of the contest I had wanted to see!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/17/2011 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations Carolyn on your win in this Haiku contest of Debbie Guzzi. Love, Carol

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/13/2011 6:24:00 PM

hey sweetie! you decide do you want the FOCUS to be the snow storm OR the howling wind? you don't need both..and line 3 needs to be more concrete more sensory less vague..soup mail!

Jack Horne

Date: 11/8/2011 11:25:00 AM

Wow, I reckon Debbie will love this one. She's given me some more lessons

Kash Poet

Date: 11/8/2011 10:21:00 AM

Very good imagery here in this haiku.Best wishes in the contest.

John Freeman

Date: 11/7/2011 6:16:00 PM

Cool hoots in a tree trunk. You is country now lady. Soup Mail, Agape, Moses

Daver Austin

Date: 11/7/2011 2:19:00 PM

What a great image - owls in tree trunks. Shiver. Love, daver

John Aaron Green

Date: 11/7/2011 12:23:00 PM

enjoyed.....

Edward Mccormick

Date: 11/7/2011 11:01:00 AM

Lovely, Lovely! Viva landscapes aglow!