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How You Make the Stars Hush

I might forget you for a little while but when the last desert hues of sunset roses wrap the bareness of these arms Out of nowhere and without reason I think of you Darkness falls and so my tears but then the wind wafts its zephyr breeze and exhales away my fears My fears,the deepest of fears I ever fear A pearlescent moon rises above an unshaped horizon casting its opalescent glow upon my face making me feel your warm embrace Silver dust descends so softly like your lips over my skin It confirms you've returned back from wherever you have been Your return brings back the melody as you love me unexpectedly Oh my love come close ,Come lean on me How you make the stars hush breathlessly Once again you play your music on the muffled strings of my heart Once again the fluting sound of distant birds fulfill two souls that can never truly part Oh my love come close ,Come lean on me How you make the stars hush breathlessly Still,so still they keep our secrets and would not reveal life's destiny
Tnks for the inspiration,not for the contest (For those who wish to participate its the contest -'How you make the stars hush')

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/2/2015 5:29:00 AM
Simply amazing char, a favorite!
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Date: 3/22/2015 10:30:00 AM
Big hugs back, dear Charma! Your comments made me smile-- you have a good memory, with Jollibee! And I'm happy my card reached you-- wow! That took a long time :)! I think it went island hopping first ;)! Enjoy your week!
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Date: 3/21/2015 11:25:00 AM
You've written so magical beauty with the prompt given, dear Charma... you make it seem so easy, writing this gem--- I really enjoyed the imagery you put in here, such a subdued write but so intricately and intimately written. How are you Charma? I hope all is well with you and your lovely family.
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Date: 3/14/2015 4:11:00 PM
Excellence.... sincerity, love.... Superb Charmaine! Love, K
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Date: 3/6/2015 8:47:00 PM
I needed to reread this poem of romantic longing Charma, and compliment you on how you made such a beautiful lyric out of the contest's spirit "Oh my Love, come close, come lean on me, how you make the stars hush breathlessly..." the picture for this poem is very romantic too...J.A.B.
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Date: 3/6/2015 4:49:00 PM
If any poem could "hush the stars" ....it would come from you! You take the breath away from everything such exquisite words might touch! Lovely lovely!!
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Date: 3/6/2015 10:37:00 AM
In the stars you find inspiration...and your heart sings love's tune. Lovely! #7 // paul
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Date: 3/5/2015 2:01:00 PM
beautifully painted as always charmaine love the imaginary used excellent pen dear pal
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Date: 3/5/2015 8:42:00 AM
Charma, I love how the words flow ever so softly, and I am lulled by the glow they fill me with...aren't we fortunate that we get to enjoy the depth of your talent. Love your piece,7x my dear. I cast my vote for its entry. Hugs and smiles. :D Kim
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Date: 3/5/2015 5:10:00 AM
Fascinating imagery that exposes a plethora of feelings in outmost beauty, dear Charmaine!
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Date: 3/4/2015 9:28:00 PM
Magnificent poem, and a talent for words that is so obvious. You should enter this...you will probably win! :)
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Date: 3/4/2015 9:03:00 PM
The beauty of your poetry is not revealed in contests, rather it blooms prettiest as a heart unjudged my Lady Hawk...your face aglow in moonlight hope, radiant and loving softly...the stars gaurd the dreams of destinies glowing upon hearts beating hard...the color, and emotional textures in this poem are breathtaking..."Your return brings back the melody, as you love me uunexpectedly..." J.A.B.
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Date: 3/4/2015 8:26:00 PM
The imagery is outstanding and emotionally empowering...beautifully written.. My favorite line "Once again the fluting sound of distant birds fulfill two souls that can never truly part"....great job..love this!!
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Date: 3/4/2015 6:06:00 PM
Beautiful....each line a brush stroke of poetry. Like it so much:)
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Date: 3/4/2015 5:09:00 PM
Dreamy loving poetry at it's best Charmaine leaving the reader imaging such beauty. You never fail with your writes, hugs, James :) :)
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Date: 3/4/2015 4:06:00 PM
TELL ME how u got such broad vision that u can get up like the moon.. #well a beeautiful sum-up of emotions with utmost love ,,and floating faiths at my window..#love@burningsoulz
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Date: 3/4/2015 2:08:00 PM
Beautiful, my dear. You should enter it. Justin will love it.
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Date: 3/4/2015 12:30:00 PM
simply stunning Charmaine...you have captured a true and deep love. You have hushed the stars and out shone the moon...a favourite ......hugs Tim
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Date: 3/4/2015 10:39:00 AM
such beautiful imagery - Charmaine:-) Hugs Jan xx
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