How you became You

   When something outside
     clicked with something inside you

   The fusion of the two
     remade you completely anew
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Brotherton Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 5:26 PM
Some wise words Gershon.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 1:35 PM
So many outside connections affect us!
Fowler Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 12:04 PM
Total truth gw. And for the better, hopefully. :)
Wolf Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 6:32 PM
Think so? Me, too. For sure for the better, I'd say...
Lawless Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 6:17 AM
YEAH!!!! and it happened more than once.....thus I became "just another foul mouthed saint"
Jones Avatar
February 4, 2024 at 6:14 AM
Clever
Baker Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 9:05 PM
Unless it's an inside joke. Seriously, a wise poem, gw, makes good sense to me. BB
Greenhough Avatar
February 3, 2024 at 9:01 PM
Hey, that happened to me, too. Thanks for this comfort of being.
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