How You Are Old
It has come to my attention
so I thought that I might mention
to relieve your concern with old age
you really must turn the page
which will help to release any tension.
I'll mention, and I know that it's bold
but it's apparent that you must be told
although you're advancing in years
which is one of your major fears
it's not how old you are - it's how you are old!
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