How You Are Defined

You are not defined by just your age, so don’t use it
as an excuse for not doing what you really want to do.

 You are not defined by just your gender.
It’s an important distinction whether you are male or female,
but in many aspects of life,
you must expect and demand equality.

You are not defined by just the color
of your skin, hair, and eyes.
Appreciate your beautiful colors, 
whatever they may be, and do not judge others
whose colors are different from your own.

You are not defined by your family’s reputation
or past mistakes you have made. Love yourself and know
it’s in your power to change bad habits,
improve yourself and grow your talents.

You are so much more than all the aforementioned things.
God’s strength is in your soul’s DNA,
for you are a child of the Creator, and He is Love;
therefore, you are ultimately defined by Him, and
by how you treat your fellow man.

Dec. 27, 2018 for John Hamilton's "You Are Not Defined By" poetry contest
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Obinefo Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 9:38 AM
congratulations on your win. this poem deserved nothing less. its was creative, intellectual and most importantly excellent
Obinefo Avatar
December 30, 2018 at 9:37 AM
congratulations on your win. this poem deserved nothing less. its was creative, intellectual and most importantly excellent
Faulkner Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 3:55 PM
Congratulations, Andrea, this is a stirring write!
Davey Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 2:31 PM
Well we all know one thing you are defined by Andrea and that is ONE GREAT POET and WRITER. Congrats
Y. Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 9:07 AM
WoW! Andrea, Everything about this piece good. I agree with the message contained in this well written piece. I see why you got the top stop. Congratulations on a well deserved win.PS, Somehow I forgot to enter mines:-)Alexis
Hamilton Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 8:49 AM
Congrats Andrea on a shared first place win, this was exactly what I was hoping for!
May Avatar
December 29, 2018 at 8:20 AM
Well said Andrea...we should always follow the golden rule..
Krutsinger Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 9:36 PM
This is a FAV for me Andrea. It makes sense in every single direction and possible way. Good luck in the contest.
Kiser Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 3:46 PM
Well penned truth; "God’s strength is in your soul’s DNA,"; good line.
Pandit Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 7:07 AM
So much to learn from what we are not defined by..I like the ending line..well said, Andrea.
Blown Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 5:13 AM
it's always strange how god, a mystery an-swear, is answer to a mystery
Allison Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 3:38 AM
wise words indeed Andrea, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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