How Woke Won

While we were sleeping
Snug in our beds
Lost in our dreams
A black spirit stole across the land
And by dawn had merged with every shadow

When we awoke
We took for granted the lingering critical sensibility
- as if awaking with a hangover
from the spectacular successes and excesses
of our civilization –
And before our morning cup
Could clear our heads
Had embraced this dark spirit
With the fervor of the newly converted
Impulsively, compulsively taking yin to yang
As if reborn from our primal roots

But when civilization falls
And is abandoned
- and undermining eventually always leads to collapse –
What is left is tribalism
But without the innocence of its youth
And youth without innocence 
Is just tyranny without conscience
Shadow without form

Woke won because we became soft and sloppy 
Ungrateful and guilty for all the pleasures and abundance
The hard work of Life bestows

(5/6/23)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 9/5/2023 2:51:00 AM
One can only hope that ...eventually, the youth will be abruptly woken awake from the gadgets that are slowly turning us all into cyborgs, while we watch the world burn and drown and cower under war machines and politics and religion, like we are watching a movie, not real at all. What would it take, to tear them away from such electric hypnosis?
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James Moore
Date: 9/5/2023 7:23:00 AM
Sometimes I fear only an EMP (natural or man-made) will do it...
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