How To Make Your Woman Swoon

So your sweetheart seems to be less amorous these days?
Show her some attention, but for some added bliss,
know her and what makes her tick. All you’ve got to do is
go back to the basics. Did you ever think of this?

Pay attention while I give some good advice to you!
Play romantic music. Lead her underneath the moon.
Sway with her so gently.  Then gaze into her eyes.
Say what’s in your heart but sweetly. . . She’ll be sure to swoon! 


(This is Lento poem; I discovered too late that for the contest, it had to be based
on a theme of summer or rain!! But oh, well!! This was my practice)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/17/2013 5:54:00 AM
Like Harry I have also got the recipe...Nice to read your old poems.
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Date: 9/20/2012 10:10:00 AM
Ok Andrea next time we meet, i've got the recipe, but i've lost my youthful looks, hope you don't mind
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/20/2012 10:20:00 AM
hahaha
Date: 8/18/2011 11:51:00 PM
Thank-you for the insights; I'll give them a try. Is it better under a full moon?
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Date: 7/31/2011 5:07:00 PM
A willing ear, a receptive eye. Is my advice to every guy. But if you don't have love in mind. Your heartless advances will be unkind. So love her truly and make her yours. And she will surely be so nice behind closed doors.
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Date: 7/29/2011 2:03:00 PM
Romance on how to make woman swoon ha ha Good one my friend. love phyl
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Date: 7/26/2011 2:55:00 PM
Thanks for the romance advice. It is a good poem with a fine rhyme scheme. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/26/2011 8:35:00 AM
Thanx for your special comments..excellent advice and exemplary poetry..SJ
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:41:00 PM
Awwwww.....Give'in some pointers to the gents....Hey??? lol
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Date: 7/25/2011 9:39:00 PM
Okay, now this one needs to be made into a T-shirt, Card....No, I'm wrong. One of those Self Help CD's that can be played in the car, for some over and over. ;-) I, too, have done this. Looked at a contest, quickly, written something then had one of thos V8 moments. My biggest problem: LENGTH! I get the idea and go gung ho and then I read later: 14 line maximum. 14 LINES? I'm just getting warmed up at 16 LINES....nice one this. Cyndi
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Date: 7/25/2011 8:54:00 PM
A verse with the best advice yet.
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Date: 7/25/2011 6:49:00 PM
I'll have to look up this; "Lento poem" Andrea. I'm thinking it has to do with the poet sharing. I like the idea. I like this write! have a great week dear poet ! Much love, james
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James Peranteau
Date: 7/25/2011 6:51:00 PM
p.s., I'll be sure to "Swoon", my next date! *Smiles*
Date: 7/25/2011 6:20:00 PM
practice or not i read it very carefully. john
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Date: 7/25/2011 5:13:00 PM
Swoon to Clare de Lune. Yes! If I were 50 years younger I would try out this formula. Isn't it romantic - that's the name of a song you could play, err, he could play. Duh! Love, daver
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Date: 7/25/2011 3:22:00 PM
Lovely piece - even if it can't be entered for the contest : )
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Date: 7/25/2011 12:20:00 PM
This lento here sure can be very handy for the guys ;) Hopefully you can enter this for another contest! This one is a gem, you can charge guys for this write, heehee, kaching $.$ kaching-- kidding :D hugs to you sweetie :D
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:47:00 AM
Nicely done, Andrea. Good advice too! Love, Robert.
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Date: 7/25/2011 10:10:00 AM
great practice and great advice too Andrea.. all men need to read this..haha.. I did the same thing as u..wrote something inspirational..then..realized themes were rain and summer..oh..so rewrite a new entry..good luck with the new one my friend..this is a treasure to keep ...oh..
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Date: 7/25/2011 9:12:00 AM
I am taking notes...ha.
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Date: 7/25/2011 8:31:00 AM
Me likey likey Andrea ;-) some guys need these tips lol ;) lfde Wilma
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Date: 7/25/2011 7:56:00 AM
This is some good advice and lovely rhyme thanks again for welcoming me back to the soup its nice to be back ... love Jayne x
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Date: 7/25/2011 3:59:00 AM
andie, so sweet and fair! this can be like rain..'cmon , try!! beautifully scribed.. miss ya! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 7/25/2011 2:46:00 AM
Smile, *^_^* “I Love The Swaying With Her Gently Aneath The Gazing Moon = My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Andrea == Tis Always A Blessing to Be Reminded In Regards Unto The Areas of Love *^_^* Especially When Amid A Place Going A Million Miles An Hour & Finding Oneself Spinning Into The Bowl Easy to Become Lost Unto What Truly Matters *^_^* Which Above All Things Is, Love *^_^* Wonderful Poem My Dear.” === My Love to You Always & Forever, Jasper *
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Date: 7/25/2011 2:43:00 AM
A beautiful poem in this new form.
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Date: 7/25/2011 2:42:00 AM
Nice lessons learnt.To be applied:)
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