Andrea Dietrich Poet Rhyme

How To Make Your Woman Swoon

So your sweetheart seems to be less amorous these days?
Show her some attention, but for some added bliss,
know her and what makes her tick. All you’ve got to do is
go back to the basics. Did you ever think of this?

Pay attention while I give some good advice to you!
Play romantic music. Lead her underneath the moon.
Sway with her so gently.  Then gaze into her eyes.
Say what’s in your heart but sweetly. . . She’ll be sure to swoon! 


(This is Lento poem; I discovered too late that for the contest, it had to be based
on a theme of summer or rain!! But oh, well!! This was my practice)

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Kash Poet January 17, 2013 at 5:54 AM Like Harry I have also got the recipe...Nice to read your old poems.

Harry Horsman September 20, 2012 at 10:10 AM Ok Andrea next time we meet, i've got the recipe, but i've lost my youthful looks, hope you don't mind Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2012 at 10:20 AM hahaha

John Smith August 18, 2011 at 11:51 PM Thank-you for the insights; I'll give them a try. Is it better under a full moon?

Robert Johnson July 31, 2011 at 5:07 PM A willing ear, a receptive eye. Is my advice to every guy. But if you don't have love in mind. Your heartless advances will be unkind. So love her truly and make her yours. And she will surely be so nice behind closed doors.

Phyllis Babcock July 29, 2011 at 2:03 PM Romance on how to make woman swoon ha ha Good one my friend. love phyl

Matthew Anish July 26, 2011 at 2:55 PM Thanks for the romance advice. It is a good poem with a fine rhyme scheme. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

S.Jagathsimhan Nair July 26, 2011 at 8:35 AM Thanx for your special comments..excellent advice and exemplary poetry..SJ

Dan Kearley July 25, 2011 at 10:41 PM Awwwww.....Give'in some pointers to the gents....Hey??? lol

Cyndi Macmillan July 25, 2011 at 9:39 PM Okay, now this one needs to be made into a T-shirt, Card....No, I'm wrong. One of those Self Help CD's that can be played in the car, for some over and over. ;-) I, too, have done this. Looked at a contest, quickly, written something then had one of thos V8 moments. My biggest problem: LENGTH! I get the idea and go gung ho and then I read later: 14 line maximum. 14 LINES? I'm just getting warmed up at 16 LINES....nice one this. Cyndi

Elizabeth Wesley July 25, 2011 at 8:54 PM A verse with the best advice yet.

James Peranteau July 25, 2011 at 6:49 PM I'll have to look up this; "Lento poem" Andrea. I'm thinking it has to do with the poet sharing. I like the idea. I like this write! have a great week dear poet ! Much love, james James Peranteau July 25, 2011 at 6:51 PM p.s., I'll be sure to "Swoon", my next date! *Smiles*

John Loving Iii July 25, 2011 at 6:20 PM practice or not i read it very carefully. john

Daver Austin July 25, 2011 at 5:13 PM Swoon to Clare de Lune. Yes! If I were 50 years younger I would try out this formula. Isn't it romantic - that's the name of a song you could play, err, he could play. Duh! Love, daver

Jack Horne July 25, 2011 at 3:22 PM Lovely piece - even if it can't be entered for the contest : )

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 25, 2011 at 12:20 PM This lento here sure can be very handy for the guys ;) Hopefully you can enter this for another contest! This one is a gem, you can charge guys for this write, heehee, kaching $.$ kaching-- kidding :D hugs to you sweetie :D

Zzzzz Zzzzz July 25, 2011 at 10:47 AM Nicely done, Andrea. Good advice too! Love, Robert.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 25, 2011 at 10:10 AM great practice and great advice too Andrea.. all men need to read this..haha.. I did the same thing as u..wrote something inspirational..then..realized themes were rain and summer..oh..so rewrite a new entry..good luck with the new one my friend..this is a treasure to keep ...oh..

Jslambert Mister Roboto July 25, 2011 at 9:12 AM I am taking notes...ha.

Wilma Neels July 25, 2011 at 8:31 AM Me likey likey Andrea ;-) some guys need these tips lol ;) lfde Wilma

Jayne Eggins July 25, 2011 at 7:56 AM This is some good advice and lovely rhyme thanks again for welcoming me back to the soup its nice to be back ... love Jayne x

Nette Onclaud July 25, 2011 at 3:59 AM andie, so sweet and fair! this can be like rain..'cmon , try!! beautifully scribed.. miss ya! :) huggs, nette

Jl Sadberry July 25, 2011 at 2:46 AM Smile, *^_^* “I Love The Swaying With Her Gently Aneath The Gazing Moon = My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Andrea == Tis Always A Blessing to Be Reminded In Regards Unto The Areas of Love *^_^* Especially When Amid A Place Going A Million Miles An Hour & Finding Oneself Spinning Into The Bowl Easy to Become Lost Unto What Truly Matters *^_^* Which Above All Things Is, Love *^_^* Wonderful Poem My Dear.” === My Love to You Always & Forever, Jasper *

Kash Poet July 25, 2011 at 2:43 AM A beautiful poem in this new form.

Kash Poet July 25, 2011 at 2:42 AM Nice lessons learnt.To be applied:)