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How Times Have Changed

Summer sun embraced the verdant meadow Sprinkling golden waves of heat across the lea From tall Black-eyed Susans and Goldenrod, To the cool, rippling brook where crayfish stay Hidden beneath the moss-covered limestone, Where young, barefoot boys were wont to play Those were times now consigned to long ago Because of dangers and bizarre cultural norms, Children play in public parks carefully attended By parents, or guardians, or men in uniforms, Spend their leisure time with game computers Interested in how the latest pop star performs. Teenagers tell me I am too old to understand, But their minds have become a vast wasteland. NINTH PLACE WINNER written June 20, 2021 for "Contemporary Sonnet" Poetry Contest sponsored by Charlotte Puddifoot

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Date: 8/25/2021 5:17:00 PM
Indeed, and unfortunately, your wondrous pen spills profound truth, Milton. Childhood today is a far cry from the adventurous, free-wheeling childhoods of yesteryear. Your thoughtful and beautiful sonnet resonates strongly with me, my friend. Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlotte's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/25/2021 6:23:00 PM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful, kind words, Susan. They mean a lot to me, and I appreciate them.
Date: 8/25/2021 5:52:00 AM
i like how you intertwined the traditional and the contemporary within this sonnet; it's very well written, and i particularly like that closing line - i think many minds have become a vast wasteland! lol this was a difficult contest to judge as i had a lot of superb entries - congrats on your win!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/25/2021 8:57:00 AM
Thanks so much for my placement, Charlotte. I certainly appreciate your comments on my poem.
Date: 8/25/2021 5:21:00 AM
Teenagers tell me I am too old to understand, But their minds have become a vast wasteland. - Beautiful Lines. Congratulations on your win!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/25/2021 8:58:00 AM
Thanks so much, Christuraj, for your thoughts on my poem.

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