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A once pretty, teenage girl, heavily pregnant Stood in the rain, Her clothes torn, her eyes red, her ankles Swollen, she was in pain. She often stood on the corner of this Busy street, Begging everyone, someone please give me Anything to eat. Her eyes vacant, she just Blankly stared, No one in this vast rushed world Actually cared. Often bought her a MacDonalds or Kentucky meal, Her situation inhumane, horrific Almost unreal. She was weak, could hardly walk, Seemed to be in a daze, Her hair was dirty, long, and the wind slapped it across her face, I gave her a two hundred Rand note, Placing it in her hand, Said shhhhhhh, as if I already knew, Don’t tell a soul, I could see her miserable life, Had already taken it's toll. I drove her to the outskirts of her home, Which was always known To be a dubious zone. A middle aged, man with greasy hair, That was going grey, still somewhat fair, A cigarette hanging from his mouth, Came from somewhere Out of nowhere, Saw in her hand the money, Darn you don’t need this honey, I’ll buy me my moonshine! She heavily made her way through the Garbage scattered on the floor, And sank on a torn sofa, not minding who Was standing by the door, Cruel, filthy mouthed, continually cursing, Who was this bad man shunning her hurting, Husband, father or brother, I’ll never know, I saw no mother! Poem Of The Day on 2/09/2021

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Date: 2/28/2021 2:57:00 AM
A very sad reality ...
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Date: 2/27/2021 9:09:00 AM
Jennifer, You wrote well of a place and moment and fate of one. Individuality is the first to go and easiest to take. A reality that most resembles a trap. And the girl the target. -Richard
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Date: 2/18/2021 11:28:00 AM
True life situations...You have described it well...Congratulations Jennifer Proxenos on POTD.
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Date: 2/19/2021 4:23:00 AM
Thank you Arturo dear friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/16/2021 5:35:00 AM
Oh that poor girl. What a deeply touching piece Jenniefer. HOpe this isn't a true story. Great write. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/19/2021 4:28:00 AM
It is true half way Judy , the only bit of fantasy is I would have been scared stiff to go into her neighborhood. However still see her and give her clothes or what ever I can. She had the baby the next day and has the baby 9 a little girl, too cute) with her in an old pram but do help her as much as I can. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/15/2021 3:03:00 PM
An emotional write, Jennifer. Your words allowed me to visualize this sad scene. Congratulations on winning Poem of the Day :)
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Date: 2/19/2021 4:30:00 AM
Thank-you Angela, I still see her on the same corner and help as much as I can. Thank-you for your congrats and your visit. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/14/2021 7:45:00 AM
Tore my heart in two... Your words so descriptive. Congrats on your POTD
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Date: 2/19/2021 4:35:00 AM
It is heart rending to see - even gave her shampoo and conditioner and had some old baby clothes which I gave her, the baby was born the next day and she was on the corner the day after with the pram. Sad case. Help when I am able, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Date: 2/14/2021 2:40:00 AM
OmG! My eyes are filled with tears!! You wrote this so well. I am at loss of words. Don't know what to say. Heart touching write.. Thank you for sharing dear friend.
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Date: 2/19/2021 4:39:00 AM
Poor girl never had parents to guide her. She speaks Afrikaans mainly and I only know a little but we manage to communicate - help as much as I can. Hugs, Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/13/2021 9:43:00 AM
Sadly, these kinds of people are everywhere in the world today. the title was very true! POTD, I see. Big congratulations.
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Date: 2/19/2021 4:41:00 AM
Thank-you Andrea my friend, so sad you are right. Hugs and blessing, Jennifer. P.S, She had the baby the next day.
Date: 2/12/2021 11:18:00 PM
Jenn, your compassionate heart shows in all of your writings, and this one is so heartrending for the bleak picture painted of this teenage girl. Keep writing from the heart, dear friend. I applaud your POTD. Blessings and hugs ~ John
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Date: 2/11/2021 4:45:00 PM
Hello Jennifer … wonderfully written and described. The young mother has no future with the type of men who control her, but where does she go. It’s a very sad indeed but these circumstances are all around us - thanks Jennifer - Lindsay
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Date: 2/19/2021 4:47:00 AM
They sure are Lindsay - as I mentioned to others above she had the baby, a lovely little girl the next day. But she is mostly on this corner where else she goes, goodness knows. Thank you for a great comment Lindsay. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/11/2021 3:32:00 AM
Love it... again... and back to say Congrats on POTD :)
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Date: 2/19/2021 4:48:00 AM
Thank-you Gina my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2021 11:01:00 PM
Jenni am so sorry I couldn't log in to Soup dear friend as my mother in law is sick...and missed this GREAT write. This is SO moving and sad. Congrats on your very deserving POTD. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 2/20/2021 1:09:00 AM
Hi Ani, I am trying to keep up with business and poetry - I am juggling the two but work must win as that is our livelihood. But I do poetry in the evening or weekends -I have made time for me. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2021 7:53:00 PM
The sad truth is, this happens more than it should. I wish it weren't so. Your thoughts touch my heart. Congratulations Jennifer, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 2/20/2021 1:12:00 AM
I know Brandy, it is heartrending to see, but you can only do so much, she probably answers to a pimp and takes drugs. Thank you for a wise comment my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2021 7:21:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD!
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Date: 2/20/2021 1:16:00 AM
Thank-you Milton, your congratulations and lovely comment are gladly received. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2021 5:39:00 PM
Congrats Jenn Lots of Drama. Panagiota xx
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Date: 2/20/2021 1:18:00 AM
Thanks Panagiota mou, your comments always are a pleasure to receive and your congrats much appreciate Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2021 5:25:00 PM
Terrific write about the harsh reality of what William Saroyan facetiously called 'The Human Comedy.' And congrats on POTD! ~ Best always, Gershon
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Date: 2/20/2021 1:33:00 AM
The human comedy or the Human tragedy, he did write it a little inappropriately and his humor failed. What surprises me is that people don't learn, it is only now that people are afraid and wearing masks. Thank you for your congrats dear friend Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2021 3:36:00 PM
What a sad story, Jennifer, and a HUGE congrats on potd. This truly hurts because there people like these... Hugs ~
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Date: 2/20/2021 1:26:00 AM
There sure are my friend and they are multiplying , the worlds population is exploding, as a result, I think we will go through more viruses. Thanks you for your comment Akkina, I appreciate and love you. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2021 2:27:00 PM
Such a very sad story, Jennifer, this happens so often. Right know the homeless by the thousands on the side walks or vacant lots in tents. Great job in writing this sad story. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/20/2021 1:23:00 AM
Thank you Eve, it is tragic still watching her with the baby in an old pram. I help when I can, not much else I can do. Thanks for your congrats, my friend. Blessings, hugs and love Evie, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2021 2:03:00 PM
Congrats on POTD. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 2/20/2021 1:20:00 AM
Thank-you Regina, love being blessed and your congrats are much appreciated. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Date: 2/10/2021 1:09:00 PM
Hello Jennifer, oh so sad this poem is. made my eyes teary. I felt sorry for this girl. Congrad on your win. Darlene
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Date: 2/19/2021 11:19:00 PM
Im' sure many shed a tear, and she has had the baby now and still stands on the corner with the pram. thank you for your congrats my friend, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2021 11:23:00 AM
- A touching story, dear sister Jenny ... congratulations so much on yours p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/19/2021 11:17:00 PM
Thank-you Sunshine smile - there are sad cases like this globally, when parents are too drunk to care or understand. And thank-you for your congrats, Hugs and love sis, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2021 8:11:00 AM
Sad but a deserved POTD. ~~
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Date: 2/19/2021 11:15:00 PM
Thank-you Victor, yes a very sad story! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2021 8:00:00 AM
Dark depths of pain and despair. A deeply moving tragic tale, reflecting both your empathy and onlookers apathy. Congrats on POTD.
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Date: 2/19/2021 11:14:00 PM
Thank you Unseeking Seeker for an awesome comment and thank-you so much for you congrats. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2021 7:59:00 AM
Jennifer, amazing storytelling, I was gripped from the first word and want to know what became of the girl now, a big congratulations on POEM OF THE DAY, very deserving _Constance
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Date: 2/19/2021 11:11:00 PM
She has had the baby and still stands at the corner begging, I still give her what I can but the taking her home was fictitious - I would be petrified to go into the area where she lives. Thank -you for a marvelous comment my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Date: 2/10/2021 7:05:00 AM
A sad sad story, Jennifer. BIG congrats on poem of the day.
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Date: 2/19/2021 11:06:00 PM
Thank-you Vijay and this situation is still happening all over the globe, what a crying shame. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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