How Sad Man Bad

A once pretty, teenage girl, heavily pregnant
Stood in the rain,
Her clothes torn, her eyes red, her ankles
Swollen, she was in pain,
Her resilience worn out, she often stood on the  
Corner of this busy street,
Her eyes pleading for someone to give her
Something to eat,
Some People feel no empathy towards others, 
Life is hard, few seemed to care.
I Often bought her a MacDonalds meal, 
Her situation inhumane, horrific unreal.
Did she ever know freedom, she was weak,  
And could hardly walk, constantly in a daze,
Her hair was dirty, long, and the wind
Slapped it across her face.
I gave her a two hundred Rand note,
Placing it in her hand, Shhhhh I whispered,
As if I already knew, Don’t tell a soul,
I could see her miserable life,
Had already taken it's toll.
I drove her to the outskirts of her home,
Which was always known
To be a dubious zone.
A middle aged, man with greasy hair,
That was going grey, but was once fair,
A cigarette hanging from his mouth,
Came from some-where
Out of no-where,
Saw in her hand the money, 
Darn, you don’t need this honey, 
I’ll buy me my moonshine!
She heavily made her way through the 
Garbage scattered on the floor, 
And sank on a torn sofa, just seeking peace,
Not minding who was standing by the door,
The cruel, filthy man continued cursing,
His endless oppression evident, 
From the girls bruises glaring.
Who was this pitiful, bad man beating
This unfortunate girl, a father, a brother,  
If undeservedly he held one of these titles,
How did he dare to show his drunken face, 
Such people do exist in our sad human race,
I began crying, as I will never know,
I saw no mother, in fact I saw no other.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Neumann Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 2:57 AM
A very sad reality ...
Theraven Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 9:09 AM
Jennifer, You wrote well of a place and moment and fate of one. Individuality is the first to go and easiest to take. A reality that most resembles a trap. And the girl the target. -Richard
Michael Avatar
February 18, 2021 at 11:28 AM
True life situations...You have described it well...Congratulations Jennifer Proxenos on POTD.
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 4:23 AM
Thank you Arturo dear friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Ball Avatar
February 16, 2021 at 5:35 AM
Oh that poor girl. What a deeply touching piece Jenniefer. HOpe this isn't a true story. Great write. God Bless, JB
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 4:28 AM
It is true half way Judy , the only bit of fantasy is I would have been scared stiff to go into her neighborhood. However still see her and give her clothes or what ever I can. She had the baby the next day and has the baby 9 a little girl, too cute) with her in an old pram but do help her as much as I can. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Crabtree Avatar
February 15, 2021 at 3:03 PM
An emotional write, Jennifer. Your words allowed me to visualize this sad scene. Congratulations on winning Poem of the Day :)
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 4:30 AM
Thank-you Angela, I still see her on the same corner and help as much as I can. Thank-you for your congrats and your visit. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Mcgee Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 7:45 AM
Tore my heart in two... Your words so descriptive. Congrats on your POTD
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 4:35 AM
It is heart rending to see - even gave her shampoo and conditioner and had some old baby clothes which I gave her, the baby was born the next day and she was on the corner the day after with the pram. Sad case. Help when I am able, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
Zahid Avatar
February 14, 2021 at 2:40 AM
OmG! My eyes are filled with tears!! You wrote this so well. I am at loss of words. Don't know what to say. Heart touching write.. Thank you for sharing dear friend.
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 4:39 AM
Poor girl never had parents to guide her. She speaks Afrikaans mainly and I only know a little but we manage to communicate - help as much as I can. Hugs, Blessings, Jennifer.
Dietrich Avatar
February 13, 2021 at 9:43 AM
Sadly, these kinds of people are everywhere in the world today. the title was very true! POTD, I see. Big congratulations.
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 4:41 AM
Thank-you Andrea my friend, so sad you are right. Hugs and blessing, Jennifer. P.S, She had the baby the next day.
Watt Avatar
February 12, 2021 at 11:18 PM
Jenn, your compassionate heart shows in all of your writings, and this one is so heartrending for the bleak picture painted of this teenage girl. Keep writing from the heart, dear friend. I applaud your POTD. Blessings and hugs ~ John
Laurie Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 4:45 PM
Hello Jennifer … wonderfully written and described. The young mother has no future with the type of men who control her, but where does she go. It’s a very sad indeed but these circumstances are all around us - thanks Jennifer - Lindsay
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 4:47 AM
They sure are Lindsay - as I mentioned to others above she had the baby, a lovely little girl the next day. But she is mostly on this corner where else she goes, goodness knows. Thank you for a great comment Lindsay. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Mcintosh Avatar
February 11, 2021 at 3:32 AM
Love it... again... and back to say Congrats on POTD :)
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 4:48 AM
Thank-you Gina my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Jayasankar Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 11:01 PM
Jenni am so sorry I couldn't log in to Soup dear friend as my mother in law is sick...and missed this GREAT write. This is SO moving and sad. Congrats on your very deserving POTD. Hugs ~ Ani
Proxenos Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 1:09 AM
Hi Ani, I am trying to keep up with business and poetry - I am juggling the two but work must win as that is our livelihood. But I do poetry in the evening or weekends -I have made time for me. Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
Nicole Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 7:53 PM
The sad truth is, this happens more than it should. I wish it weren't so. Your thoughts touch my heart. Congratulations Jennifer, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
Proxenos Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 1:12 AM
I know Brandy, it is heartrending to see, but you can only do so much, she probably answers to a pimp and takes drugs. Thank you for a wise comment my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Hankins Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 7:21 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved POTD!
Proxenos Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 1:16 AM
Thank-you Milton, your congratulations and lovely comment are gladly received. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Romios Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 5:39 PM
Congrats Jenn Lots of Drama. Panagiota xx
Proxenos Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 1:18 AM
Thanks Panagiota mou, your comments always are a pleasure to receive and your congrats much appreciate Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Wolf Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 5:25 PM
Terrific write about the harsh reality of what William Saroyan facetiously called 'The Human Comedy.' And congrats on POTD! ~ Best always, Gershon
Proxenos Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 1:33 AM
The human comedy or the Human tragedy, he did write it a little inappropriately and his humor failed. What surprises me is that people don't learn, it is only now that people are afraid and wearing masks. Thank you for your congrats dear friend Hugs and blessings. Jennifer.
Downing  Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 3:36 PM
What a sad story, Jennifer, and a HUGE congrats on potd. This truly hurts because there people like these... Hugs ~
Proxenos Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 1:26 AM
There sure are my friend and they are multiplying , the worlds population is exploding, as a result, I think we will go through more viruses. Thanks you for your comment Akkina, I appreciate and love you. Hugs and Blessings, Jennifer.
Roper Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 2:27 PM
Such a very sad story, Jennifer, this happens so often. Right know the homeless by the thousands on the side walks or vacant lots in tents. Great job in writing this sad story. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
Proxenos Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 1:23 AM
Thank you Eve, it is tragic still watching her with the baby in an old pram. I help when I can, not much else I can do. Thanks for your congrats, my friend. Blessings, hugs and love Evie, Jennifer.
Mcintosh Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 2:03 PM
Congrats on POTD. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
Proxenos Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 1:20 AM
Thank-you Regina, love being blessed and your congrats are much appreciated. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 1:09 PM
Hello Jennifer, oh so sad this poem is. made my eyes teary. I felt sorry for this girl. Congrad on your win. Darlene
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 11:19 PM
Im' sure many shed a tear, and she has had the baby now and still stands on the corner with the pram. thank you for your congrats my friend, Blessings and hugs, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 11:23 AM
- A touching story, dear sister Jenny ... congratulations so much on yours p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 11:17 PM
Thank-you Sunshine smile - there are sad cases like this globally, when parents are too drunk to care or understand. And thank-you for your congrats, Hugs and love sis, Jennifer.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 8:11 AM
Sad but a deserved POTD. ~~
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 11:15 PM
Thank-you Victor, yes a very sad story! Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Seeker Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 8:00 AM
Dark depths of pain and despair. A deeply moving tragic tale, reflecting both your empathy and onlookers apathy. Congrats on POTD.
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 11:14 PM
Thank you Unseeking Seeker for an awesome comment and thank-you so much for you congrats. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
La France Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 7:59 AM
Jennifer, amazing storytelling, I was gripped from the first word and want to know what became of the girl now, a big congratulations on POEM OF THE DAY, very deserving _Constance
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 11:11 PM
She has had the baby and still stands at the corner begging, I still give her what I can but the taking her home was fictitious - I would be petrified to go into the area where she lives. Thank -you for a marvelous comment my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
February 10, 2021 at 7:05 AM
A sad sad story, Jennifer. BIG congrats on poem of the day.
Proxenos Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 11:06 PM
Thank-you Vijay and this situation is still happening all over the globe, what a crying shame. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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