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For JCB Bruhl's contest How My First Poem was Born

How My First Poem Was Born

Toddler singing songs
Almost all the words are wrong
Fierce spirit so strong
At that moment born poet
Creating words notes and hopes

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Date: 12/16/2024 6:40:00 PM
This is so cute!! Thank you for sharing the adorable beginning of your poetic journey. Congratulations. ^___^
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/16/2024 9:37:00 PM
Aw thanks! :0)
Date: 12/15/2024 12:31:00 PM
This is so sweet. How young you began. Congrats
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/15/2024 2:29:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 12/14/2024 8:11:00 PM
"Creating words notes and hopes" - Grand concept of poetry. Congratulations!
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/15/2024 1:14:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 12/1/2024 5:32:00 AM
If one has a fierce spirit to do something, he/she can accomplish it. So your poetic traits, you exhibited even at the toddler stage. No wonder, you are a poet now. Enjoyed your half humorous poem.
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Karen Jones
Date: 12/1/2024 6:50:00 AM
Thanks Valsa! Have a great weekend!
Date: 11/30/2024 11:40:00 AM
- Remember, a huge tree was just a small seed... (the tree has really grown :) - Best wishes in the contest, Karen :) - hugs
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/30/2024 1:14:00 PM
Aw such a sweet comment! Thanks Anne-Lise!
Date: 11/30/2024 2:44:00 AM
I now know you sing well too...!!! you create joy too dear poet.
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/30/2024 6:16:00 AM
Thanks dear poet! I sang better in youth! I do more writing now. Have a blessed weekend!
Date: 11/29/2024 8:58:00 PM
Cute!
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/29/2024 10:52:00 PM
I appreciate you Kim!
Date: 11/29/2024 6:24:00 PM
Karen, so it was always in your blood! I think there be a lot of truth to how we are wired. It's all fun thank goodness. Smiles to you and everyone who reads your poem!
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/29/2024 8:03:00 PM
Smiles and hugs back Duke! God bless you!
Date: 11/29/2024 5:02:00 PM
So sweet from you Karen I can picture you trying to be crrative at such a young age. Priceless...
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/29/2024 5:04:00 PM
Thanks for reading Michael. I remember wanting to write and actually crying because I couldn’t lol.
Date: 11/29/2024 12:36:00 PM
I like this one. I can see it and relate to it, singing songs, almost all the words wrong, making stuff up, and singing with a fierce spirit!
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Karen Jones
Date: 11/29/2024 12:44:00 PM
Thanks David!
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