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For JCB Bruhl's contest How My First Poem was Born

How My First Poem Was Born

Toddler singing songs
Almost all the words are wrong
Fierce spirit so strong
At that moment born poet
Creating words notes and hopes
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Brul Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 6:40 PM
This is so cute!! Thank you for sharing the adorable beginning of your poetic journey. Congratulations. ^___^
Jones Avatar
December 16, 2024 at 9:37 PM
Aw thanks! :0)
Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 12:31 PM
This is so sweet. How young you began. Congrats
Jones Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 2:29 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Alex Avatar
December 14, 2024 at 8:11 PM
"Creating words notes and hopes" - Grand concept of poetry. Congratulations!
Jones Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 1:14 AM
Thanks
George Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 5:32 AM
If one has a fierce spirit to do something, he/she can accomplish it. So your poetic traits, you exhibited even at the toddler stage. No wonder, you are a poet now. Enjoyed your half humorous poem.
Jones Avatar
December 1, 2024 at 6:50 AM
Thanks Valsa! Have a great weekend!
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 11:40 AM
- Remember, a huge tree was just a small seed... (the tree has really grown :) - Best wishes in the contest, Karen :) - hugs
Jones Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 1:14 PM
Aw such a sweet comment! Thanks Anne-Lise!
mysore Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 2:44 AM
I now know you sing well too...!!! you create joy too dear poet.
Jones Avatar
November 30, 2024 at 6:16 AM
Thanks dear poet! I sang better in youth! I do more writing now. Have a blessed weekend!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 8:58 PM
Cute!
Jones Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 10:52 PM
I appreciate you Kim!
Beaufort Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 6:24 PM
Karen, so it was always in your blood! I think there be a lot of truth to how we are wired. It's all fun thank goodness. Smiles to you and everyone who reads your poem!
Jones Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 8:03 PM
Smiles and hugs back Duke! God bless you!
Tor Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 5:02 PM
So sweet from you Karen I can picture you trying to be crrative at such a young age. Priceless...
Jones Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 5:04 PM
Thanks for reading Michael. I remember wanting to write and actually crying because I couldn’t lol.
Crandall Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 12:36 PM
I like this one. I can see it and relate to it, singing songs, almost all the words wrong, making stuff up, and singing with a fierce spirit!
Jones Avatar
November 29, 2024 at 12:44 PM
Thanks David!
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